Open Poetry #19 |
A Little Less In Sight |
Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
In cold and clouded eyes there is an anger. The very last of control swings its final blow then dies insignificantly upon once strong soil. Somewhere there was a breath of me so long ago a girl and I'm not fighting now to be the real me because the clown took over the solitude gets the best of a person once the pity parties start getting wild flavored. How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Allow me to buy the first round! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) I think it all takes time to find out who we really are when we are so very young, sweet friend, I have known this anger before all too much and it is quite a tedious test to overcome but in the end the victory is rewarding! (kiss on cheek) I hope now peace fills your heart, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jenn, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
I've seen those eyes... nicely written |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
"the solitude gets the best of a person. . . " sometimes. . . when we let it. . . well done. . . emotional and profound. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Jenn~ awwww I have tears in my eyes....hope all is good with you...Peace Lauren~ ~Greeneyes~ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
What acumen shown here Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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brianbeaudry Member
since 2001-07-20
Posts 410Northern Ontario Canada |
and I'm not fighting now to be the real me because the clown took over the solitude gets the best of a person once the pity parties start getting wild flavored Tis a battle you'll not have to fight alone dear friend, you have much support and many friends here.Powerful and emotional penmanship!!! HUGZ Temptress |
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