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We, Us
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We, Us |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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We, Us There is never an I or he nor is there a you or she but there is a definite we, as therein lies the mystery Love binds our care together We look neither right nor left but we feel the heave and heft so hear the us that lies within which keeps us from looking again and again Love binds us together The us of we is marvelous so much sharing, so little fuss the miles of smiles, sweet good cheer knowing what we say, we hear… love winds us together If I were to take a step you would take one too if I were to skitter about in joy you'd be skittering, too Love is kind, together If I were to softly cry you would only hold me closer and if you were to softly sigh I'd be your angel on your shoulder love is ours, together The we of us is circumspect from our footfalls we expect to hear one of the other even if we only live in realm of mystery We bind our us together Repost from 25 Jan. 01 Revised 01 Apr. 02 |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
The we of us is circumspect from our footfalls we expect to hear one of the other even if we only live in realm of mystery You covered alot of familiar places. Really liked this part. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea A beautiful tune of "we". Soft and tender write to read. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Karilea...what can I say? Beautiful..perfect..'we, us'..wonderful warm words. I'm keeping this! Hugs You!  ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I really wish I could write like you |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ EXACTLY ! !  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwww, I too think it is a pleasant feeling to make "him and her" convert into "we" and feel true loves knots finally tied together! (sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
nice to see how the he and her can blend as one..nice write |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
I, ME, ME, I REALLY LIKE THIS!  SHENACHIE |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
loved it |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I don't know how I missed this but I thank you for the repost. A beautiful piece |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Love is kind, together If I were to softly cry you would only hold me closer and if you were to softly sigh I'd be your angel on your shoulder love is ours, together'' This is such an emotional statement...very beautiful sunshine... Lauren~ Step through the barrier of my mind, enter my soul, feel my desire, let my eyes guide you into the shadows of my heart [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (04-03-2002 12:44 PM).] |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
so true....so true and wonderful penned, thread to library. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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