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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2002-03-29 05:41 AM



Your Move

Another sleepless night
as I watch your movements.
Your breaths intrigue me,
each one a kiss, as it reaches my cheek
and flutters my lashes.
I smile, at the thoughts that cross my mind,
then reach over to almost kiss your lips,
to see how close I can get
before you feel my warmth
desiring you.

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

© Copyright 2002 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved
catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
1 posted 2002-03-29 07:12 AM


Like this style on you, Maureen. Sounds like a smile hidden inside.
Sandra

Rex Allen McCoy
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Sippin a Timmy's in London
2 posted 2002-03-29 07:37 AM


Oh darn!
And I slept right through it

This is good Maureen

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
3 posted 2002-03-29 07:39 AM


Maureen,
WOW

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
4 posted 2002-03-29 08:46 AM


Sandra, thanks..there's always a smile inside me..*s

hugss
M


Rex
You sure??..I thought it was those even breaths of yours that tickled my fancy
*s

M


Sy, I can't believe it..I finally WOWed you..laughin'
thanks
*s
Me


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Deep in the heart
5 posted 2002-03-29 09:33 AM


I am pretending
my simulated sleeping
a lure for your warmth

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2002-03-29 10:29 AM


Nice to have someone to admire...James
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7 posted 2002-03-29 07:40 PM




(smiles) Sooooooo beautifully romantic, sweet friend, may each little touch forever bring a smile to your heart and embrace you with loves warmth and compassion! (kiss on cheek) This is touching, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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8 posted 2002-03-29 08:06 PM


Sweet, Warm and loving...and, beautiful too!
Great work, Maureen...
~hugs~

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
9 posted 2002-04-04 01:47 PM


Interloper...

I am pretending
my simulated sleeping
a lure for your warmth


I awake to you
breath caresses kissing cheek,
and smiles for your eyes.


Always a pleasure to read your romantic responses.*s
JamesMichael ..I admire many James, and one in particular. *w  thank you

Noah...You are very swet and I appreciate  every word  from you. and the time you take to do so.

hugss
M
Lyra...thank you..you are always a bright  spot in my day.

hugss
M


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