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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2002-03-31 08:43 PM



                                  ~On This Note~
                                  ~*Marge Tindal*~
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If you should come~
and dance among my memories
I would play your sweet song again
Knowing nevermore would your melody
fade from the heart of this friend
For in the notes of your song
you would linger long
please come~




~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
             noles1@totcon.com                         

© Copyright 2002 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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1 posted 2002-03-31 08:47 PM


How beautiful is this Marge!?
Well...it just tops off my Easter!
Love the way you do these shape poems.
Hope yours was a peaceful and happy Easter.
~Bunny Hugs, Nancy~

vlraynes
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Somewhere... out there...
2 posted 2002-04-01 05:20 PM



Marge-
Well, of course, I love this one; and I'm
very happy to see it finally in the forums.
It's perfect!
Love you
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

SmartChick
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3 posted 2002-04-01 08:21 PM


This is really good, Marge! Just like everything else you write. I enjoy reading your poems.
NewEnglandlazurlu
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4 posted 2002-04-01 08:26 PM


Ah, those memories. Does this have anything to do with packing up old ones? You are about to make a whole new lifetime of wonderful memories!
Think of the adventures you can share with Delaney.  Fabulous as always,
Hugs, Marti

" My wrinkles are badges of courage and reveal that I am a Mother."

dgvarner
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5 posted 2002-04-01 09:19 PM


very nice miss margie...i'm really enjoying the feeling of this one.........i think i'll enjoy it a few more times......

hugs, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"anger is nothing more than unfulfilled desire.."  -unknown

Marge Tindal
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6 posted 2002-04-01 09:51 PM


Enchantress~
Awwwww, thank you gal~
The 'shapes' just have a mind of their own.
This one in particular ... L O N G  story behind getting it to post~
*See below !

Vicky~
LOL ... 'FINALLY' is right !
From December 2000 until now trying to get it to post ... HELLO !
Whewwwwwww !  It took some doing~
And a 'little' tweak from the Wizard himself~
Say, "Thank you, Wizard !"

SmartChick~
Thanks gal ... a little fun piece of merry-making~

Marti~
You know ... all things are relevant~
Yep ... it could have been a 'time-delayed' encounter~

DG~
You're a sweetie !
*HUGS*
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

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7 posted 2002-04-01 09:52 PM


Marge:  How can anyone resist such a sweet invitation?  I'm coming!

Betty Lou Hebert

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8 posted 2002-04-01 10:22 PM


Marge

Somehow I know that being in your thoughts, even as a memory...would be the sweetest thing.  Hugs!

The Rusty Knight
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9 posted 2002-04-01 11:17 PM


Marge,

You are amazing...always something new and wonderful.

Dan

Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream.

Janet Marie
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10 posted 2002-04-01 11:40 PM


As in the thoughts of whispering winds ... times allows the invitations of the heart to etch their memories on the walls of eternity.

Wink wink

ge gv yuhi!!!

Marge Tindal
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11 posted 2002-04-02 09:22 PM


BettyLou~
You're a sweetie~
Come on and sing it gal~

Martie~
Awwwww, *hug*

Dan~
Thank you ... I love 'new and wonderful'~

JanetMarie'sComputerInDisguise~
I'd recognize that sweet whispering wind anywhere~
I love you too~
~*MeInEcstasy*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

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