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Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2002-03-30 12:26 PM

Through the eyes of passion in flame
a sight of one so bold
Ready to love life not a game
in yearn of touch to hold

Look into the wells of two eyes
and find the comfort nigh
A vision of soft truth, no lies
the feelings of short sigh

See eyes of most humble of men
in search of light caress
Share with him of that not a whim
in thoughts of love expressed

For hind the orbs does dwell a heart
of size beyond compare
In need of love, wishing to start
as soft gleam takes you there.

The soul does rest in the true sight
of gaze which touches then.
As sparkle shines within the light
from the vision within.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-03-30 12:33 PM

(smiles) You describe the true love found in eyes so wonderfully and descriptively, sweet friend, I think we can all identify the truth in love if in every glimpse we smile and in every stare a smile is shared between two! (smiles) May you and your love forever find peace in each others eyes, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

amusemi
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1262
A State of Disarray

2 posted 2002-03-30 12:43 PM

Quite the loving obsservation depicted in this piece. What a joy to look into these eyes and see such a wonderful thing!

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

3 posted 2002-03-30 01:11 PM

In need of love, wishing to start
as soft gleam takes you there.

Beautiful, romantic words, Barry

~Easter Hugs~

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

4 posted 2002-03-30 03:21 PM

Insightful, and rich. I always enjoy your work very much. ThisDiamond

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2002-03-30 04:59 PM

The soul does rest in the true sight
of gaze which touches then.
As sparkle shines within the light
from the vision within.
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Barry, your kind and loving heart shines through with this tenderly penned piece my friend. Enjoyed this one very very much!
~Happy Easter to you and yours, hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

6 posted 2002-03-30 06:18 PM

Barry~

Indeed what the eyes can tell, this is a soft romanic piece...very lovely my friend...

Lauren~

~Greeneyes~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into th

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

7 posted 2002-03-30 06:56 PM

This is very soft, and very good...a welcome read this afternoon....

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