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Now I love you consciously
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Now I love you consciously |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
One day when you sit on the porch of loneliness think of me and how unconsciously I loved you Destiny can play cruel tricks the love I gave you turned you into my worst enemy How can it be that when love is given for free it can't succeed And when you think of me be sure that you know that now I know better I love you consciously [This message has been edited by walker (03-30-2002 02:00 PM).] |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
A powerful message of a lesson learned! You do have a couple typos...'worse' you want 'worst'...'whe' you want 'when' if you've not edited here before, let me know, I'll try to help...I learned by trial and error, a longer trip than if I'd asked ;o} Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Deep thoughts on love, walker...quite ponderous!  |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh Walker, this is sooooooo emotionally powerful, sweet friend, yes, may you always follow your heart and love with comfort and content in mind! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walker, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
In a single golden capsule you have portrayed the grandest tragedy...what of a world where we share our bodies, and never know the one we are with. This is truly a deeply honest and honorable writing. ThisDiamond |
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