Open Poetry #19 |
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Surrender |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC ![]() |
Surrender There’s so much life I’ve left to live So much still I’ve got to give And as long as the fire of my life is burning still I’ve the strength left to do my will ~*~ The strength to give up this fear that in me lies within The power to know and understand you my best friend What if we didn’t tell them and they never knew Just how much I’ve in love with you ~*~ Cause I’d surrender everything To just love you as I do To live my life to the fullest To reach my hand out to you ~*~ I know you can feel our love too We’ll make it; this I promise you A thousand dreams I still believe We’ll see them come true to eternity ~*~ I know I can’t survive another night away from you You’re the reason behind all I do You’re the inspiration that allows me to go on You are the heart of my love song ~*~ Right now, there’s no better time for you and me From this fear we will break free We’ll make this fantasy into reality As the rain comes down endlessly ~*~ I’d surrender everything to feel you in my arms again I reach to you my lover and most cherished friend I know you can feel it too We’ll make it through, this I promise you ~*~ Every night my love is getting longer This fire continues to get stronger I’ll swallow my pride I’ll catch your fall yes my darling I surrender For you I surrender all ~*~ "you can't stop the rain from pouring down can't stop the world from turning 'round can't stop me from loving you no matter what you do" [This message has been edited by Aimster (03-30-2002 06:30 AM).] |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Amy, A powerful expression of love.You make me envious ![]() Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may you together surrender into each others hearts where your dreams rest and find true comfort and peace there always! (kiss on cheek) This is another wonderful addition to your gorgeous love library, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Amy, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
oh Amy ![]() you do write of your love so beautifully!! It's like reading a page of your heart. ![]() |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Amy...you write of love so very eloquently and with such great feelings...Very well done! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Aimster, A powerful write, enjoyed the read. |
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