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inspiredpoetwriter
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0 posted 2002-03-29 10:43 PM



3/29/2002


Deep in his heart there’s
A pain so badly hurting and
Tearing him apart that
He’s no longer with a love
In his life.

Tears fall down his cheek’s
To theblood red floor
Memories flow of his lover
Laughter, passion , excitement
Andhappiness hekeeps hush up..

Wind blows the sent of her body
Away rain washes her feel and
Kisses to the ground
On his knees he reaches up for
An answerwith nothing to grab..

By: Me

¥¤¥¤¥¥¤¥¤¥iM a PoEt WhO wRiTeZ Wit HeR Heart ¥¤¥¤¥¥¤¥¤¥

© Copyright 2002 Care - All Rights Reserved
Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2002-03-29 10:48 PM




(sigh) This is sooooooo beautifully bittersweet, sweet friend, I pray that these two can help each other and relate to each others tears and bleeding hearts and their love can grow in an instant and their hurt can be replaced with hope! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much, you have such great talent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2002-03-29 10:58 PM


Oh wow. So powerful; just love it!

I am a geek!!

BrokenAngel
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3 posted 2002-03-30 02:24 PM


Like I told you on MSN, I love it.  I'll try to get some of mine to you ASAP.

---Night Angel

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