Open Poetry #19 |
If I.. |
TriXter Member
since 2002-03-20
Posts 112The One |
If I could Turn back the hand of time, Then baby you, youd be mine, I know ive done wrong, done wrong at times, but when other guys are giving you lines, I speak truely, Straight from my heart. If I could control Love, Everyone would be happy. Not a sleepless night wondering, What if.. No crying yourself to sleep knowing It can never happen. If I could be happy, This poem would not be posted, Here i Go, another uselss poem that 3 people will read, Another one of TriX's with no rhyme scheme, With typos and no style, no title, one theme. Another sleepless night While my heart bleeds. An open wound, in an open room, with much gloom. A blackend soul to fit with a darkend heart, Wondering will this suffering end soon. Only you, You can stop this stuff, Wondering,wondering how, when ,where, Its killing me and ive had enough. In this poem my heart bleeds, No pen, no paper, no keyboard it needs. With my heart on my sleve in this fourm, everyday a new poet is born. The first day a poem we will see, And of course with poems like this, there 5 times better then me. The man of few words... |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
triXter...tonight you tear at my heart...your message rings clear..do not dispair...helen |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
triXter, sometimes we write because we bleed at other times it meets our need whatever the reason write out your heart if nobody hears you, it's still good to start a voice in the desert, a song in the wind can curtail depression and worry rescind. Write on Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) This is sooooooo wonderfully heartfelt, sweet friend, always write out your heart no matter how you feel, for we are all here for you and even when you don't get many replies, we all still read you and what your heart feels! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, all our hearts go out to you! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
It is our art that soothes us, and so we soothe ourselves. The heart flows, the quill bleeds and the pain empties to the paper. Peace to you poet. ThisDiamond |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
TriXter~ Been there many a night, many a time....peace to you for such an emotional write.... Lauren~ ~Greeneyes~ |
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