Open Poetry #19 |
Natures Secrets |
Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Natures Secrets By Larry Chadwick Like the full moon flirts with the clouds, My mind wants to play with you. As the moon makes the stars twinkle, So my heart wants to glow for you too. As the sea is drawn to the shore, So too I am drawn to you. Like the countless sands, My desires are for you. When the sun melts the snow, It reflects what you do to me. Just as the rain is soothing, I hope that my presence will be. Nature has many things to give, I have so much more to offer as well. Take my hand as we explore the world, Of what natures hints about us will tell. March 29, 2002 Everybody thinks of changing humanity and nobody thinks of changing himself. Leo Tolstoy |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Larry, I liked this it was like whispers in the dark Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Larry, I like the way you use language. ' the full moon flirts with the clouds'- I like that. Nan |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Kethry, Leave the lights off. :eeks: Thanks. Nan, Wow. Thanks. I liked that. [This message has been edited by Larry C (03-31-2002 01:00 AM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) This is sooooo beautiful, nature indeed offers us so many miracles and gifts and we all wish you true happiness forever as you walk the world with your love! (big hugggsssss) This is fabulous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Larry, thankyou for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
This was nice Larry. Nature does hint, doesn't it! Like a wink. ThisDiamond |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Larry C, Just make sure you take an umbrella. LOL enjoyed |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Larry~ This is just lovely.....all of nature and love tied into one....beautiful my friend.... Lauren~ ~Greeneyes~ Step through the barrier of my mind, enter my soul, feel my desire, let my eyes guide you into th [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (03-31-2002 09:36 AM).] |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Larry darling boy this is simply outstanding writing. Again flawless and perfectly presented. What can I say but this is exceptional. Wonderful flow and rhythm as you seem to always do you’ve tied nature and love in perfectly. Very well done, excellent writing, marvellous language usage Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Larry, this is so gentle and lilting...like a soft spring rain....very nice. ~Happy Easter to you and your Nancy Lee~ ~Bunny hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
I really like this, Larry. I love nature things. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
When the sun melts the snow, It reflects what you do to me. Just as the rain is soothing, I hope that my presence will be. Geez Larry, I didn't know you had snow in Arizona......this is very beautiful and I'm sure that you have a very soothing presence...at least your online poetic presence is soothing.... Happy Easter.... ~big chocolate hugs~ copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I promise not to tell your secrets... Nicely done Larry C. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Noah, But what I enjoy most are the applications of natures analogies to life. Thanks. TD, So...you like those hints too! Thanks. Sy, 'Cause I'll probably need it and the waders! Thanks. Lauren, Wish I could accomplish this more often. Thanks. Mushy, How can that be happening so often...I don't get it. Thanks always. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Nancy Lee, Then it worked and thank you so much. Happy Easter to you as well. SC, Me too. And thanks a bunch. Lyra, Thank you so very much. I have heard there are online personalities. I hate that. Magnus, Oh please...go ahead! Thanks. |
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