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Larry C
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0 posted 2002-03-30 12:18 PM



Natures Secrets
By Larry Chadwick


Like the full moon flirts with the clouds,
My mind wants to play with you.
As the moon makes the stars twinkle,
So my heart wants to glow for you too.

As the sea is drawn to the shore,
So too I am drawn to you.
Like the countless sands,
My desires are for you.

When the sun melts the snow,
It reflects what you do to me.
Just as the rain is soothing,
I hope that my presence will be.

Nature has many things to give,
I have so much more to offer as well.
Take my hand as we explore the world,
Of what natures hints about us will tell.

March 29, 2002


Everybody thinks of changing humanity and nobody thinks of changing himself. Leo Tolstoy

© Copyright 2002 Larry Chadwick - All Rights Reserved
Kethry
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1 posted 2002-03-30 12:21 PM


Larry,
I liked this it was like whispers in the dark
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Pilgrimage
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2 posted 2002-03-30 12:25 PM


Larry,
I like the way you use language. ' the full moon flirts with the clouds'- I like that.

Nan

Larry C
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3 posted 2002-03-30 01:23 AM


Kethry,
Leave the lights off. :eeks: Thanks.

Nan,
Wow. Thanks. I liked that.

[This message has been edited by Larry C (03-31-2002 01:00 AM).]

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4 posted 2002-03-30 02:51 PM




(smiles) This is sooooo beautiful, nature indeed offers us so many miracles and gifts and we all wish you true happiness forever as you walk the world with your love! (big hugggsssss) This is fabulous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Larry, thankyou for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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5 posted 2002-03-30 03:03 PM


This was nice Larry. Nature does hint, doesn't it! Like a wink. ThisDiamond
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6 posted 2002-03-30 04:03 PM


Larry C,
Just make sure you take an umbrella. LOL enjoyed

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7 posted 2002-03-30 04:13 PM


Larry~

This is just lovely.....all of nature and love tied into one....beautiful my friend....


Lauren~


~Greeneyes~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into th

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8 posted 2002-03-30 04:27 PM


Larry darling boy this is simply outstanding writing. Again flawless and perfectly presented. What can I say but this is exceptional. Wonderful flow and rhythm as you seem to always do you’ve tied nature and love in perfectly.

Very well done, excellent writing, marvellous language usage


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy


To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


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9 posted 2002-03-30 05:16 PM


Larry, this is so gentle and lilting...like a soft spring rain....very nice.
~Happy Easter to you and your Nancy Lee~
~Bunny hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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10 posted 2002-03-30 05:23 PM


I really like this, Larry. I love nature things.
Madame Chipmunk
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11 posted 2002-03-30 06:54 PM


When the sun melts the snow,
It reflects what you do to me.
Just as the rain is soothing,
I hope that my presence will be.

Geez Larry, I didn't know you had snow in Arizona......this is very beautiful and I'm sure that you have a very soothing presence...at least your online poetic presence is soothing....
Happy Easter....
~big chocolate hugs~

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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12 posted 2002-03-30 06:57 PM


I promise not to tell your secrets...
Nicely done Larry C.

Larry C
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13 posted 2002-03-31 01:05 AM


Noah,
But what I enjoy most are the applications of natures analogies to life. Thanks.

TD,
So...you like those hints too! Thanks.

Sy,
'Cause I'll probably need it and the waders! Thanks.

Lauren,
Wish I could accomplish this  more often. Thanks.

Mushy,
How can that be happening so often...I don't get it. Thanks always.

Larry C
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14 posted 2002-03-31 01:08 AM


Nancy Lee,
Then it worked and thank you so much. Happy Easter to you as well.

SC,
Me too. And thanks a bunch.

Lyra,
Thank you so very much. I have heard there are online personalities. I hate that.

Magnus,
Oh please...go ahead! Thanks.

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