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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-03-30 12:40 PM



Florida Sunshine

toughness
protecting the sweet
peal me
smell the zest
divide then section
bring me
to your lips
taste the sweet
let it quench
your thirst
devour me
piece by piece


© Copyright 2002 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-03-30 12:43 PM




(sigh) Sooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, whenever I think of Florida, I think of my love Joanna, for she lives there and I dream of going there and making all her dreams come true! (kiss on cheek) May you always share the sunshine of love with your sweetheart, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
2 posted 2002-03-30 01:27 PM


1slick_lady,
Holly Molly, enjoyed

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
3 posted 2002-03-30 06:58 PM



Great Metaphors!  The juice of this is very sweet!  Now I'm hungry for oranges!  Wonder why?

Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
4 posted 2002-03-30 11:32 PM


Just finished my last orange too! Enjoyed this.
Honeybee
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5 posted 2002-03-30 11:39 PM



This is one heck of a poem! You used this metaphor to sensual perfection.  I rest my case that your style of writing is awesome!

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

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FL, USA
6 posted 2002-03-30 11:54 PM


And back to the kitchen I go again.

((Helen))
-newell

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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

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