Open Poetry #19 |
Florida Sunshine |
1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
Florida Sunshine toughness protecting the sweet peal me smell the zest divide then section bring me to your lips taste the sweet let it quench your thirst devour me piece by piece |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Sooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, whenever I think of Florida, I think of my love Joanna, for she lives there and I dream of going there and making all her dreams come true! (kiss on cheek) May you always share the sunshine of love with your sweetheart, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
1slick_lady, Holly Molly, enjoyed |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Great Metaphors! The juice of this is very sweet! Now I'm hungry for oranges! Wonder why? |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Just finished my last orange too! Enjoyed this. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
This is one heck of a poem! You used this metaphor to sensual perfection. I rest my case that your style of writing is awesome! Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
And back to the kitchen I go again. ((Helen)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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