Open Poetry #19 |
An Unworthy Child |
SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Why was I not protected Kept safe from all harm Why did they betray me Causing me great alarm Always afraid to trust In solitude I stayed No one could I turn to I was always afraid Learning very quick I had to protect myself What else could I do There was no one else Always being yelled at For something they did When it came to my fears Those feelings I just hid Anger built up inside me I wasn't worth the time To be protected by them It always just blew my mind Being an unworthy child To never really be loved Learning to accept it Life was just too rough © By Sue 3-29-02 |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(EXTRA BIG HUGS) Oh Sue, this is something I know completely well, sweet friend, when I was a little boy I felt no one loved me every day and once I tried to sacrifice myself because I struggled to believe in God back then and I thought He wanted me to live just to be hated and devoured by everyone, and I always felt depressed, but then after I met my 9th grade English teacher, he changed my life forever and now I have learned to love myself and God and while there will always be those who suppress my doctrines or give me a cold shoulder, I know we all have a few close friends and that is something I am blessed for! (sigh) No one should ever be treated that way, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and know you are loved by so many always! We all love you so much, sweet friend, my thoughts are with you always, God Bless You! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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inspiredpoetwriter Member
since 2002-01-05
Posts 104Minnesota |
Hey! Well i have to say that wuz pretty good and veddy well writen *claps* keep it up.. :) ;) ~MUCH LOVE N POET RESPECT~ Luv, ~Inspired~ ¥¤¥¤¥¥¤¥¤¥iM a PoEt WhO wRiTeZ Wit HeR Heart ¥¤¥¤¥¥¤¥¤¥ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sue...here is a warm hug for you...I think you certainly deserve one...HHHHHUUUUUGGGG!! |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Sue, I'm so sorry you had to go through this. Big hugs to you....you aren't unworthy here. sky I'm in charge, and I say question authority! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SmartChick~ Sweet, sweet Sue ... my friend you simply have to know that I find great worth in you ! I am more because of your friendship~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Peace and big HUGSSSS to you..... Lauren~ ~Greeneyes~ |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
A sad sad, sweetly written poem, Sue... I'm so sorry that you had to live this, but its probably what makes you such a good poet. ~hugs~ copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Thank you all for your replies. |
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