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Open Poetry #19

Into the Night...

Tim
Senior Member

since 1999-06-08

Posts 1794

0 posted 2002-03-31 02:40 PM

I gently slip
into the night,
upon the wings
of angel’s flight.
Above the clouds
of heaven’s floor,
Unto the fields
of evermore.
Beyond the pain
of man’s existence,
No more the pull
of sin’s resistance,
Eyes now sightless,
yet I see,
The verdant plains
of heaven’s lea,
As gently slip
into the night,
Seeking out
eternal light.

skyshine

Member Elite

since 2002-02-07

Posts 3058
Beneath the northern stars

1 posted 2002-03-31 03:34 PM

Very gentle.

sky

I'm in charge, and I say question authority!

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2002-03-31 04:18 PM

Wonderful!

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

3 posted 2002-03-31 05:05 PM

Deep spiritual mood in this....well done!

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-03-31 06:18 PM

(smiles) Yes, I too felt a huge spiritual feel reading this, may you spread your wings always and embrace his warm light with joy! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tim, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

5 posted 2002-03-31 06:42 PM

Very beautiful, Tim!

Englishpoet
Member

since 2001-12-18

Posts 54
Birmingham, England

6 posted 2002-03-31 07:33 PM

Dear Tim

This is poetry with sofe and gentle flow. If only Death was as peaceful as you describe, no one would fear it. I wish that our Queen Mother went the way you describe.

Good work.

Asif

The heights by great men reached and kept
Were not attained by sudden flight,
But they while their companions slept
Were toiling upward in the nigh

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

7 posted 2002-04-01 07:38 AM

Eternal poetic flight shall be yours indeed...

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