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Looking For The Good Times
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Looking For The Good Times |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Looking For The Good Times By: Noah Eaton 3/29/02 I have cried an ocean and salted my wounds as a commodity I ate it up like an entree and I was still hungry I was weary of going with the flow, all those currents made me hydrophobic When to me there was no such thing as a love that felt so tantric Don't make me feel ashamed, before all I had to cry upon was against a wall My conscience used to guide me like directories in a shopping mall Now I have a shoulder I can lean on, I swear I am fortunate Don't get me wrong, I feel I've changed, I'm ready to keep on living If I could meet you it would be wonderful Let the good times come If I could hold you it would be magical Let the good times come What could I give to save my life And make you mine? I want to be one with lifes simplest pleasures paparazzi Shed my worries away with a paring knife and coddle my dreams Train myself like a malamute looking to win a dog sled race I'm ashamed to feel estrange but now I feel like Apollo seeing your pretty face If I could meet you it would be wonderful Let the good times come If I could hold you it would be magical Let the good times come What could I give to save my life And make you mine? You can teach me to hone my love, I will fashion your heart with tiffany glass I used to write the saddest poems before we met at last I want to hold you and feel your loves sensation Promise me you'll be mine forever, I can't afford another objection If I could meet you it would be wonderful Let the good times come If I could hold you it would be magical Let the good times come What could I give to save my life And make you mine? What would I give to save my life And make my life complete... [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (03-29-2002 11:34 PM).] |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Noah, you show the sensitive side of a man as well as any I have read a blessing to see your words. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Very beautiful and romantic, Noah...is it for Joanna?  ~hugs~copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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TriXter Member
since 2002-03-20
Posts 112The One |
*clap**clap* Bravo Noah! I really enjoyed this, as i should Considering subject of it all, blah blah i say this too much :P Good job , enjoyed. Why love something, that will never love you back? |
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