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RosePetal
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0 posted 2002-03-29 03:04 PM


A streak of good luck
Has brought you into my life
I'm lucky times twice

© Copyright 2002 Joanna - All Rights Reserved
Aimster
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1 posted 2002-03-29 03:15 PM


joanna,
beautiful sanyru! im not very good at these
so i sit in awe of anyone who can write them,
and it's apparent you can! take care.
amy

"you can't stop
the rain
from pouring down
can't stop the
world from turning 'round
can't stop me from
loving you
no matter
what you do"

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2 posted 2002-03-29 03:16 PM



It is wonderful
to know a good person when
you see him smiling

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3 posted 2002-03-29 03:20 PM


lovely Joanna dear..enjoyed hugss

             ~Vic


"If music be the food of love, play on."  (William Shakespeare)



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4 posted 2002-03-29 03:24 PM


Joanna darling girl now this is one of your utter utter best, I love it. YOU have such a fabulous talent and in this you portray it to pure perfection.
Outstanding writing as always you show how well you can write yes darling girl anyone who has your love is blessed with luck


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy



To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

[This message has been edited by Marsha (03-29-2002 03:25 PM).]

Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2002-03-29 03:50 PM


RosePetal,
Enjoyed the read.

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6 posted 2002-03-29 04:37 PM


Joanna~

This is fantastic....the way love should always be....

Lauren~

~Greeneyes~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into th

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7 posted 2002-03-29 05:38 PM


Joanna,

I love it. Very nicely done.

~ Titus

"My body is merely the canvas of my soul."
         ~ The Night Owl

walker
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8 posted 2002-03-29 05:42 PM


This reminds me of my turtle, Lucky. I love it.
Jonas
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9 posted 2002-03-29 06:06 PM


Nice write!!!!!

You should give this poem to the lucky guy.

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10 posted 2002-03-29 06:34 PM




(smiles) Ooohhhhhhh...oh Joanna, I love you so much, you too have made me feel so lucky for I never thought I'd ever find a girl so heavenly like you and you have made me feel so happy inside too! (kiss on lips) I will always be yours, my love, I love you! (kisses)



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

RosePetal
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11 posted 2002-03-29 06:44 PM


The LUCKY guy already read the poem
He knows who he is!

Thanks Everyone

TriXter
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12 posted 2002-03-29 06:48 PM


*smile* Enjoyed

The man of few words...

Madame Chipmunk
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13 posted 2002-03-29 07:07 PM


very sweet, Joanna......"lucky times twice"
I really like that!
~hugs~

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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