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Open Poetry #19

This is what it does

TriXter
Member

since 2002-03-20

Posts 112
The One

0 posted 2002-03-29 06:27 PM

Somones going to take yur heart,
Dont let it happen It happend to me too,
Somones going to take youre heart,
and this is what it will do to you.
This is what it does,
Takes yur heart, youre soul, youre ability to see,
yes this is what it did to me.

Somones going to be eyein' you now,
u might smile, and feel the happy sigh,
yea somones going to be eyen'you now,
At the end itll make you cry.
Dont let annyone eye you boy,this is what itll do to you.
Takes youre tears, youre smile,youre sigh,
dont let this person make, youre heart die.

Somones goin to make you smile,
This isnt bad or so it seems,
somones goin to make you smile,
but it hurts more then youre wildist dreams.
Dont let annyone smile for you,
this is just what itll do,
takes youre laugh,youre smirk,youre smile,
this time not just for a while.

Dont let annyone get to close,
Dont let annyone get too close to you,
Youve read this poem and what it will do
Youve read what i have said, and what ive said is true.

-TriXter

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2002-03-29 07:39 PM

I agree with some of what you said,
but the choices we make are our own
in turn there is no passing the blame.
I'm sorry for your pain,
but the very idea of never smiling
for or to anyone again will never
happen. Life is too short!!!

I liked your poem but I am not in
your shoes, not to say I don't own
a pair.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-03-29 09:19 PM

(sigh) These are indeed some very powerful thoughts, sweet friend, I too agree with some you say and some of what BluesSerenade said, I think it always helps to try and find what makes us smile for life is too short to waste and too precious also! (big hugggssssss) My thoughts are with you always, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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