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Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

0 posted 2002-03-29 03:29 PM

you've touched me in ways you'll never know
loving me, youv'e helped me to grow
my soul and heart no longer belong to me
to you they are bounded for eternity

your every wish is now my command
from you nothing will i ever demand
just be true to me, love me as you do
cherish me, and i will always love you

marry me, become my wife
to have and to hold in this life
your laugh is like music to my ears
your smile diminishes my tears

i've never known a love more beautiful than this
everyday i want to be wrapped up in your kiss
to live with you for the rest of our days
all i want is your love for always

if every you need me, i'll be there
to show you that i love you, to always care
when times are hard, and you feel down
please know i'll always be around

your love has given me wings to fly
lonely tears i no longer cry
a joy is now in my heart and soul
you've made pieces of me into whole

never leave me, and i promise you
to you i will always be faithful and true
never hurt me or tell me lies
if you need to see our love, look in my eyes

"you can't stop
the rain
from pouring down
can't stop the
world from turning 'round
can't stop me from
loving you
no matter
what you do"
[This message has been edited by Aimster (03-29-2002 03:32 PM).]

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

1 posted 2002-03-29 03:38 PM

Amy darling lil sis of my heart I think this is utterly utterly spectacular. The flow the construction the rhythm all combine to make this a truly outstandingly fabulous poem. Rarely is writing this good, certainly this far exceeds my expectations and my expectations for you are always high. YOU are a very good writer and this proves it.

Absolutely excellent work

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2002-03-29 03:44 PM

Aimster,
A beautiful lovely write, enjoyed

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-03-29 07:00 PM

(smiles) This is so sweet and tender, sweet friend, may he always look into your eyes and together may you feel the love you felt at first sight and fall in love all over again through every gaze! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Amy, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

4 posted 2002-03-29 09:33 PM

I like this so much...I wish I had written
it....

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2002-03-29 09:40 PM

Beautiful...just perfect! Hugs.

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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