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Jeffrey E. Osborne
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since 2001-11-01

Posts 160
out there

0 posted 2002-03-29 06:20 AM

All my sins remembered
In my not so forgotten past
Are still creating the illusions
That are too magical to last
Reality will only look away
Before returning to expose the truth
Of the aging fabrications
Created in misspent youth
My story has lost its luster
It’s been told one too many times
Secrets spill from between the lines
Of these oft repeated rhymes
If you look closer at my disguise
Where the cracks are beginning to show
Hidden in the questions that spill from your lips
Are the answers you already know
So be careful of what you ask for
You never know what you will get
If you think you’ve figured this “rascal” out
You ain’t seen nothing yet!

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2002-03-29 06:47 AM

great picture, enjoyed the write *s

M

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

2 posted 2002-03-29 02:58 PM

"an enigma in size 12 shoes. . . "

sorry. . . this made me think of that line. . . great job Jeff. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

3 posted 2002-03-29 03:07 PM

I enjoyed this. The cracks in the mask, eh?

Nan

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-03-29 08:21 PM

(sigh) I can see where this thought is coming from, sweet friend, it involves a lot of our own observations to purify all the sins deep inside us, and when we wish for something, it should be something within reason and unselfishness for our own actions! (big hugggssssss) This is powerful, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jeffrey, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

5 posted 2002-03-30 01:39 AM

Bump.
back with a reply laters.

But you should know I love it without my having to go into detail.

How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so.
~Sarah MacLachlan~

Tara Simms Hall
Member

since 2001-11-07

Posts 87
South Carolina

6 posted 2002-04-01 04:29 PM

I like the twist at the end of this, Jeff. No matter how you try to hide it, your personality always comes through in your writing.

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

7 posted 2002-04-02 08:18 AM

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Secrets spill from between the lines
Of these oft repeated rhymes
If you look closer at my disguise
Where the cracks are beginning to show
Hidden in the questions that spill from your lips
Are the answers you already know
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hmm..just skipping through...glad i did

much enjoyed this one jeffrey--and very well written i might add

..however...it was difficult to stay focused on the words with that heart-stopping new pic you got goin on up there..!

hugs, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"anger is nothing more than unfulfilled desire.." -unknown

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