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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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freeway in california dark veins of an old womans leg vulgar lines between the wrinkles of coastal mountains scars from quaking moments when this end of mexico moved to fast getting out of bed and flacid flesh collided with grinding bones northridge noise earth belch moans her valleys were bedridden for months but the surgeons secured her joints didn't take time for pretty not at her age hollywood gods don't touch or even look anymore she wishes gable and hughs were still around and all of their friends that used to take her to the beach on sundays ©Dark (Hollywood Freeway 101 after the quake) |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
very vivid pictures....remembering M |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Twist that one again through the wringer...that is exactly how Highway 101 looked from the air... dang, you're a marvel... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
nt, thanks m's...the scars still show today (Well yesterday anyway) Sunshine..she was a bit rough looking wasn't she..was sitting under her yesterday, admiing the work of the surgeons..Thanks lady |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Dark, Well I don't know the freeway but I can clearly see the images. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
yes, not my end of california, but you painted it for my eyes....excellent as always  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS I know this well...my home lies against the San Gabriel Mountains..quite near the great fault that may some day give me ocean front property. You painted some pretty stark images..yet, there is still beauty here, despite all the parking lots. As always your writing, so good! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Dark~Fantastic imagery here. Enjoyed much! ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
kethry thank you lady... SEA, you recognize some of these places? Martie, thank you so much for your eyes Enchantress Bless you for reading and re-ing |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I've been to Disneyland once when I was 13.....that is it for getting down to SoCal for me so far....well Fresno isn't really SoCal to me, but other than that, I just go by the pics your words draw for me besides NorCal is so much nicer  |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
she wishes gable and hughs were still around and all of their friends that used to take her to the beach on sundays Love your vision Dark Stranger~ Just one trip right after another. |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
You bring flavor to the beverly clever and art to the fault lined freeways..I enjoy your California. Sincerely, Regina |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Funny, you don't look like a Lilliputian. Enjoyed the woven image, Dark. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwww, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I just love how you depict certain scenes of culture and make such wonderful poems with fine imagery out of them! (big hugggssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Blues, thanks babe...look famliar? seems they are always shaking huh..well that is a good thing I guess. Regina, thank you for your look in..you would like it here..well if it was not shaking too much. Krawdad, arrigoto amigo..thank you for the review Noah, thank you my friend, you are so kind |
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