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Kevin

Senior Member

since 1999-11-02

Posts 729
Torrington, Ct, Usa

0 posted 2002-03-28 09:50 PM

Her eyes were far too gorgeous for the things that they had seen
Crystal strands of blue that gazed as if they understood
Each and every doubt that lied behind my own of green
I didn’t have to hide them, though with her I never could
Her smile she would save for perfect moments in the night
As if she knew how fragile I became when she revealed it
Or how when I felt empty that it always made things right
She sensed my aching heart and always found a way to heal it
She kept her hair pulled back, but only by recommendation
I couldn’t bear to see it cover such a perfect face
But every day she wore it in a well thought out creation
Each strand assuring style as it fell into its place
She didn’t mind the hours that we lost to rainy days
She didn’t mind the hours that we lost to rainy nights
And though the plot has twisted in our movie that still plays
I’ll never lose the feeling of us under the stage lights

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

1 posted 2002-03-28 09:58 PM

I love it Kevin! Your rhyming is so perfect!
I know they say that no one is perfect but when you really love someone they seem "perfect" in your eyes

[This message has been edited by RosePetal (03-28-2002 09:59 PM).]

skyshine

Member Elite

since 2002-02-07

Posts 3058
Beneath the northern stars

2 posted 2002-03-28 10:12 PM

What a compliment you have paid her by a poem such as this one.

sky

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

3 posted 2002-03-28 10:26 PM

kev,

this is beautiful poetry! i loved
every line in this...she is one very
lucky girl! it's so wonderful to see
you my sweet friend.

take care.
amy

"you can't stop
the rain
from pouring down
can't stop the
world from turning 'round
can't stop me from
loving you
no matter
what you do"

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

4 posted 2002-03-28 10:53 PM

A wonderful read with rich flavors and brightest attitudes. ThisDiamond

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-03-29 12:00 PM

(smiles) Oh Kevin, this is sooooooo beautiful, I too also believe that no one but Him is perfect, but I also feel that when true love touches our hearts, it is as perfect as anything we ever feel can get, and is so very close to perfection! (big hugggssssss) This is soooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kevin, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2002-03-29 12:35 PM

Like this Kevin...very smooth...one of my favorites...James

AniKay83
Member

since 2000-06-28

Posts 388
Missing Since 1999

7 posted 2002-03-29 12:38 PM

beautiful

"No one has ever loved ~anyone~ the way ~everyone~ wants to be loved"
~Mignon McLaughlin~

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