Open Poetry #19 |
Perfection |
Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
Her eyes were far too gorgeous for the things that they had seen Crystal strands of blue that gazed as if they understood Each and every doubt that lied behind my own of green I didn’t have to hide them, though with her I never could Her smile she would save for perfect moments in the night As if she knew how fragile I became when she revealed it Or how when I felt empty that it always made things right She sensed my aching heart and always found a way to heal it She kept her hair pulled back, but only by recommendation I couldn’t bear to see it cover such a perfect face But every day she wore it in a well thought out creation Each strand assuring style as it fell into its place She didn’t mind the hours that we lost to rainy days She didn’t mind the hours that we lost to rainy nights And though the plot has twisted in our movie that still plays I’ll never lose the feeling of us under the stage lights |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
I love it Kevin! Your rhyming is so perfect! I know they say that no one is perfect but when you really love someone they seem "perfect" in your eyes [This message has been edited by RosePetal (03-28-2002 09:59 PM).] |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
What a compliment you have paid her by a poem such as this one. sky |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
kev, this is beautiful poetry! i loved every line in this...she is one very lucky girl! it's so wonderful to see you my sweet friend. take care. amy "you can't stop |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
A wonderful read with rich flavors and brightest attitudes. ThisDiamond |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Kevin, this is sooooooo beautiful, I too also believe that no one but Him is perfect, but I also feel that when true love touches our hearts, it is as perfect as anything we ever feel can get, and is so very close to perfection! (big hugggssssss) This is soooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kevin, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Like this Kevin...very smooth...one of my favorites...James |
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AniKay83 Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 388Missing Since 1999 |
beautiful "No one has ever loved ~anyone~ the way ~everyone~ wants to be loved" |
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