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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
It is a good day to be letting wandering thoughts wonder To look at the hillside as the car courses by to see if there is something more something that I have missed before something that my eyes need to see for the first time Winter has been harsh spring is not yet here I stand tiptoe on the cusp with face in wind lifted to light and that, is living. They say living is finding one’s self I find that when I know you are thinking of me I am happiest Streamofthought poetry is really not what some people believe it to be Difficult at best To catch the feeling of f a l l And lead it to a l…………i………….n………….e |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I find that when I know you are thinking of me I am happiest I like these lines very much, Lady... and love the format you used for the ending. Our thoughts do sometimes rush out in waterfall flow... and lose their music when we try to capture them. *S* Lovely work! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) WOW!!! Oohhhhhh...I love the ending especially, sweet friend, the meaning of your words is soooooo eloquently stated in the end! (kiss on cheek) May we all step outside and ramble on with a smile in our hearts, sweet friend, all the beauty of life is always laid before us, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Your streamofthoughts makes a lot more sense than mine usually do. Mine are more like noisymessylandslides. "As soon as the generals and the politicos can predict the motions of your mind, lose it." Wendell Berry |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Suthern, my girl, I like playing with format, sometimes, if done right, it just adds, and doesn't subtract... thank you for your ever kind words, Noah... Krawdad, I must confess, this was an excerpt of many that I dictated while driving a long trip the other evening...they are all slowly evolving, something akin to cleaningthemessofthemudslidesthatwereleft after the rain |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I just went fishing in your stream of thought and caught my limit of thoughts Best of all, I don't have to clean them Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
the kind of place we need to go daily for a few hours enjoyed it LinW |
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