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Lady In White
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0 posted 2002-03-28 04:20 PM


It is a good day
to be letting wandering thoughts
wonder

To look at the hillside
as the car courses by
to see if there is something more
something that I have missed
before
something that my eyes
need to see for the first time

Winter has been harsh
spring is not yet here
I stand tiptoe on the cusp
with face in wind
lifted to light
and that, is living.

They say living is finding one’s
self
I find that when I know you are thinking
of me
I am happiest

Streamofthought poetry
is really not what some people believe
it to be

Difficult at best

To catch the feeling of  f
                                             a
                                                  l
                                                       l

And lead it to a l…………i………….n………….e


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1 posted 2002-03-28 04:43 PM


I find that when I know you are thinking
of me
I am happiest

I like these lines very much, Lady... and love the format you used for the ending. Our thoughts do sometimes rush out in waterfall flow... and lose their music when we try to capture them. *S* Lovely work!

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2 posted 2002-03-28 04:46 PM




(smiles) WOW!!! Oohhhhhh...I love the ending especially, sweet friend, the meaning of your words is soooooo eloquently stated in the end! (kiss on cheek) May we all step outside and ramble on with a smile in our hearts, sweet friend, all the beauty of life is always laid before us, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2002-03-28 04:52 PM


Your streamofthoughts makes a lot more sense than mine usually do.  Mine are more like noisymessylandslides.

"As soon as the generals and the politicos can predict the motions of your mind, lose it."     Wendell Berry


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4 posted 2002-03-28 04:58 PM


Suthern, my girl, I like playing with format, sometimes, if done right, it just adds, and doesn't subtract...

thank you for your ever kind words, Noah...

Krawdad, I must confess, this was an excerpt of many that I dictated while driving a long trip the other evening...they are all slowly evolving, something akin to cleaningthemessofthemudslidesthatwereleft
after the rain

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5 posted 2002-03-28 05:11 PM


I just went fishing in your stream of thought and caught my limit of thoughts
Best of all, I don't have to clean them

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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6 posted 2002-03-29 12:26 PM


the kind of place we need to go
daily for a few hours
enjoyed it LinW

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