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BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

0 posted 2002-03-27 01:25 AM

Fog over the mountain slips
clinging to the valleys,
hold me close that way
and lead me down the grade.

Through the passes of your heart
beneath the morning sky,
come quietly in the stillness
take my dreams and let them fly.

Walk with me through prairie fields
cascading in the sunlight,
share with me your nature
and the weaving of your tapestry.

High above the hills,
reaching a plateau
standing closer to the edge,
I hope you'll never let me go.

You're the whirlwinds in my pocket
the wanderer in my lust,
a gentle mist of rain
my rush of golden dust.

Leave your footprints on my trail
be my night turned into days,
guide me down this path
so that I'll never lose my way....

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2002-03-27 01:59 AM

aw gracious! This is wonderful! I think...I know! I've been taken on a trip! It's just beautiful!

CocoBaci
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

2 posted 2002-03-27 02:03 AM

A lovely write BluesSerenade...
*~coco~*

Verve
Member

since 1999-06-23

Posts 348
Singapore

3 posted 2002-03-27 05:42 AM

What a touching piece with such subtlety ...
This was a delight to read ...

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

4 posted 2002-03-27 07:28 AM

This literally "Blue" me away!!
It would be a pleasure to share such passes,
don't ever let go!!

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2002-03-27 08:32 AM

BluesSerenade~
I just love this~
Reminded me instantly of the old cowboy movie-line,
"Let's cut 'em off at the pass."

And this, my dear, is BEAUTIFUL ...

'You're the whirlwinds in my pocket
the wanderer in my lust,
a gentle mist of rain
my rush of golden dust.'

Here's hoping someone meets you at the pass~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

6 posted 2002-03-27 08:39 AM

BluesSerenade,
A lovely serenade. Enjoyed

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

7 posted 2002-03-27 09:23 AM

nice imagery in this and several nice word plays.... all in all a hopeful tone...

I enjoyed....

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

8 posted 2002-03-27 09:25 AM

another lovely one Lori, always enjoy your words..hugss

~Victoria

"If music be the food of love, play on." (William Shakespeare)

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

9 posted 2002-03-27 09:35 AM

Lori~

This is so soft, and so tenderly written....lovely images...

Lauren~

Greeneyes~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (03-27-2002 09:36 AM).]

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

10 posted 2002-03-27 09:44 AM

enjoyed it a lot

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

11 posted 2002-03-28 12:44 PM

I would hate to get tripped up and slide down the damn hill. Funny thing is I've followed directions and convinced myself I was lost only to find out later I was in right place to begin with.

Talk about chasing your own tail!!

Thanks so much for reading, I appreciate you all taking the time out.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

12 posted 2002-03-28 10:51 PM

I hope you know how outstanding this is!!!! I loved every word...I am SO keeping this

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

13 posted 2002-03-28 10:55 PM

Leave your footprints on my trail
be my night turned into days,
guide me down this path
so that I'll never lose my way....

This is SO very beautiful, Lori...

~hugs~

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

14 posted 2002-03-29 12:03 PM

(smiles) This is so soft and tender, sweet friedn, may your love forever etch loves footprints among your destinys path and lead you to your heavens and dreams forever! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is soooooo lovely! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

15 posted 2002-03-29 12:34 PM

Very nice...like the title...James

Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

16 posted 2002-03-29 12:47 PM

BluesSerenade...Brilliant writing!!!! Very clever comparison...inventive, innovative.

***Ivy Rose

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

17 posted 2002-03-29 08:27 AM

You're the whirlwinds in my pocket
the wanderer in my lust,
a gentle mist of rain
my rush of golden dust.

my favorite part *s....

hugsss
M

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