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The Difference |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
You say I have to follow I say I must have my own path You say you have been there I say I have to get there But you have a super highway Mine cut by thorns of knowledge Speeding to find answers I walk on calluses of past mistakes Time and again you pass my purpose As I seek things in between rocks Success has found your way Blistered in the need to explore I hunger As your purpose wanders My outlook approaches in virgin toil You finally shed your shoes before it is too late As my universe is coming into its own light In rocks you now fumble My friend I will give you a guide But the pain is yours to find My world is below my feet You search in thirst for difference While in my heaven I have everything D.Lester Young (03/28/02) Tuscaloosa, AL Copyright © D.Lester Young (White Eagle poetry) Email me at davelyoung1@hotmail.com www.authorsden.com/visit/...horID=5012 |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"You say you have been there I say I have to get there But you have a super highway Mine cut by thorns of knowledge Speeding to find answers I walk on calluses of past mistakes Time and again you pass my purpose As I seek things in between rocks" this is a fantastic write!! pure excellence  |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Yes, He supplies us with everything we need in our heaven, and the only difference is we must find these gifts and make the heaven and earth leveled so we can reach our dreams! (big hugggssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
"the pain is yours to find" ah so true so true |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
very expressive poem you've penned here. Thanx for sharing |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Well said. We each have our own path. We each have to stumble along in our own darkness, and find our own source of light. Thanks for sharing these truthful thoughts. |
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