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Aimster
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0 posted 2002-03-28 10:23 AM


You Are
AMK
3/28/02

You are

the inspiration in my ink
the thoughts behind my think
a butterfly that is the wind beneath my wings
the reason that my heart is joyous and sings

You mean

the world to me and more
the reason that my heart can soar
you are a Angel sent from the lord above
wrapping me forevermore with your love

We are

soulmates that have finally found one another
for me there shall never be another
entwined together, you are my rhyme and reason
our love shall never fade with the passing of a season

Time

flies when you are with me
apart though it drags endlessly
the ticking of the clock serves to remind
that you're not here, i wish time i could rewind

I wish

for us a lifetime of never knowing this love gone
to be able to compose our very own love song
to dance with you in neon moon so bright
for us to always bask in loves light

And when

our moment in time comes long last
future will blend with past
our hearts finally beat as one
thus our lives will have begun

You are

perfect poetry in motion
forever you have my heart and devotion
the reason i no longer question why
the peacefulness behind my sigh


"you can't stop
the rain
from pouring down
can't stop the
world from turning 'round
can't stop me from
loving you
no matter
what you do"

© Copyright 2002 Amy Kennedy - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-03-28 11:04 AM


"You are

perfect poetry in motion
forever you have my heart and devotion
the reason i no longer question why
the peacefulness behind my sigh"




(smiles) I too wish this to come true for you, sweet friend, you have a golden heart that shimmers with love and I hope that he forever will be all your heart desires! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so uch, sweet friend, this is gorgeous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Amy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2002-03-28 01:05 PM


Amy,

   This is so pretty     I'm so glad to see you posting more.  I have been quiet the past few weeks, my muse has gone away, but I have been enjoying your very pretty words

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

Opeth
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3 posted 2002-03-28 01:29 PM


I not only enjoyed the subject matter, but also the style.
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4 posted 2002-03-28 01:38 PM


Amy darling lil sis of my heart, this is utterly utterly wonderful, yes it is absolutely perfect. YOU delight the senses with this delicious and wondrous new style. I love it. What can I say darling heart you have grown so much in the last few months, LOVE really suits you darling heart, and decorates your gift of poetry with pure wonder. This is incredibly beautiful and I love it utterly utterly.

Brilliantly done


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


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5 posted 2002-03-28 02:58 PM


Awww... that was so pretty... I very much enjoy the way you put these feelings into words and the style was very nice
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6 posted 2002-03-28 03:58 PM


different indeed Amy. . . I like it. . . it's a new way to frame your feelings. . .

wonderful. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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7 posted 2002-03-28 04:48 PM


This is just beautiful! Such loving words in this... Thank you for sharing this!
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8 posted 2002-03-28 04:56 PM


Aimster,
Wonderful writing. This is a keeper.

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9 posted 2002-03-28 05:37 PM


"We are

soulmates that have finally found one another
for me there shall never be another
entwined together, you are my rhyme and reason
our love shall never fade with the passing of a season"

Amy,
I LOVE this!
excellent writing from you

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