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Corinne
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0 posted 2002-03-27 10:51 PM


Web’s Core

I can weave these words
into a spider’s masterwork,
burrow through my thesaurus,
crawl through synonyms,
foraging for mutations
in stealth-like stings,
until your notions become
antonyms.

© 2002 Cor(e)inne Bailey



[This message has been edited by Corinne (03-27-2002 11:22 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-03-27 10:57 PM




(smiles) Ooohhhhhh...this is wonderful, sweet friend, I bet with wonderful words like these you can think up many synonyms that would never change the originality of this gem! (kiss on cheek) This is a wonderful web of inspiration, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Corinne, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Corinne
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2 posted 2002-03-27 11:29 PM


Thanks, Noah!

Having a bit of fun with words!

Core

Duncan
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3 posted 2002-03-28 12:30 PM


Don't ya love playing with words???  This is cool!
Severn
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4 posted 2002-03-28 08:36 AM


Very cool...like the extended metaphor...

Only word freaks can do this kinda thing lol..

K

Corinne
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5 posted 2002-03-28 11:28 AM


Thanks, Duncan and Severn!

Corinne

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6 posted 2002-03-28 04:26 PM


aren't words fun to play with Corinne??  they're so soft and pliable. . .

great work. . .

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7 posted 2002-03-28 04:45 PM


This is very original. *S* I enjoyed it... including the signature. *S*
Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 2002-03-28 04:51 PM


Corinne,
Enjoyed the write and read.

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9 posted 2002-03-28 04:57 PM


ant-o-nyms . . . but of course.
HA AH

Kraw'

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