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Open Poetry #19

The War

Marshalzu

Member Elite

since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

0 posted 2002-03-28 05:26 AM

The War

The black rose grows strong,
As the light
Breaks the darkness,
Pride in their hearts,
And thoughts fill their heads,

The glory of knowledge
Breaks bonds of restraint,
Freedom befalls them,
And the shrouds are removed.

Silence falls upon the heaven,
As the fallen meet their maker,
And astral hosts meet dark legions,
Angelic bodies stand eye to eye

Fury and hate
Fill the heavens with thunder
As the hordes clash in anger
And the fallen seek revenge,
As they scramble from Darkness,
Led by the light.

-- Andrew: Huggle Administrator

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[This message has been edited by Marshalzu (03-28-2002 03:35 PM).]

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

1 posted 2002-03-28 11:01 AM

Silence falls upon the heaven,
As the fallen meet their maker,
And astral hosts meet dark legions,
Angelic bodies stand eye to eye''

This is an outstanding piece of art....

Lauren~

~Greeneyes~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into th

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-03-28 11:43 AM

BRAVO!!! Oh my gosh, I love this outstanding vision you've painted, sweet friend, it details how the Light can always prevail even through the darkest of times as we have after September 11th! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Andrew, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

3 posted 2002-03-28 04:40 PM

Andrew, I dont' know what to say to this... It's so incredibly deep... wow... the mental image this brought was just mind-boggling. Way intense my man, way intense.

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