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0 posted 2002-03-27 04:54 PM


reaching
the gut of dreams
exposed
in the passion of words.
each letter is a new emotion
something for which we dive into the sea of ourselves.
Learning to display our souls
our dignity
our rage
our calm
our being
in the beauty of the gift we're given.

How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so.
~Sarah MacLachlan~

© Copyright 2002 Jennifer - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-03-27 04:59 PM


Like it lots, Jenn. Good write.
Sandra

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Deep in the heart
2 posted 2002-03-27 05:01 PM


Well said

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3 posted 2002-03-27 09:41 PM




(smiles) Wow, this is a wonderfully inspiring poem, sweet friend, the way you always wonderfully ramble in your words always encourages us all to look deeper and discover our own voice with the gifts we possess! (kiss on cheek) This is a true treasure, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jenn, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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4 posted 2002-03-28 04:29 PM


yes. . . the poet not only grows in technique, but in emotion, mind, and spirit. . .

well done my friend. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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