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Reaching Out
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Reaching Out |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Reaching Out I remember when we first met, the touch was uneasy, my fingers not use to you. I tripped over the spacings my mind running too fast for the thoughts to be captured. Sight unseen, I fell in love, you taking the place of, the need so great. Times tears would flow from the visions you would plant in my mind. A future of possibilities spelled out in front of me, embracing me with willingness. Survival, once taken for granted now needing to be recognized, empowered, encouraged. You have become my companion, a lifeline at times, a voyeur eyeing my growth, though somewhat slow. If taken away, you would be missed, but I would not fall apart, or be without, for this mind's eye is possessed. Endowed with memories, experiences treasured, in my control. You are to me, the touch within my soul Reaching out... "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
You are to me, the touch within my soul Reaching out... OH that is a perfect ending, and your poem was lovely as always. Your words never fail to touch Maureen. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
speaking to my soul let us reach out together searching for comfort Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
ah.. I agree with Blues..the ending wraps it so nicely together...very nice thoughts and words my friend |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) Oh Maureen, this is fabulous, I especially love the ending, it really reaches out to us all! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Lori, actually I was writing about the computer...but I guess it could have some double meanings..*s and anyway I couldn't sleep and it was here waiting for me..it never fails to be here when I need it. hugss M Interloper ... speaking to my soul let us reach out together searching for comfort cradling thoughts, yours touching the pillowed of me enters the mind, calms I love your poetic responses.. ~smiling M C, Thank you for reading my middle of the night, wide-awake words *s M Noah...I wish I had your energy that shows through your responses. Thank you |
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Verve Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 348Singapore |
Hi M ... This was a really enjoyable read ... Interesting piece you have here. |
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