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RosePetal

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since 2001-08-26

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South Florida

0 posted 2002-03-22 11:14 PM

Love Blossomed into Death

Your in a world far away
And I'm no longer in it
I wish we could rewind to yesterday
To share just one more minute

Often, I think of you
And the way we were
It's like the wind blew
Until our love became a blur

I didn't see the warning signs
Telling me to slow down
I was just happy that you were mine
Ecstatic over the love I'd found

Now we've been apart for several months
And your with another girl
Have you even thought of me once
Since you walked out of my world?

I guess history sometimes brings grief
When we think of the past
Memories can serve relief
Since forever they will last

I thought you were my mr right
but for some reason you left
There went heaven's light
Ever since love blossomed into death

[This message has been edited by RosePetal (03-22-2002 11:24 PM).]

PoetryIsLife

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since 2001-10-27

Posts 1763
...in my boxers...

1 posted 2002-03-22 11:17 PM

I didn't see the warning signs
Telling me to slow down
I was just happy that you were mine

Rose, wonderful.

I love it... it's very real.
Heartfelt. Often we don't see the signs, telling us to slow down, when we are falling or recovering. Anyhoo.... I loved it. Much enjoyed.

~ Titus

"My body is merely the canvas of my soul."
~ The Night Owl

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-03-22 11:18 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh Joanna, this is so very sad, my heart goes out to this heartache you feel, always know that I love you so much now and will do what I can to meet you and have the love in your heart blossom into joy! (kisses on lips) I love you so much, sweet friend, I will always love you as long as you always love me, my Joanna! (kisses)

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

skyshine

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since 2002-02-07

Posts 3058
Beneath the northern stars

3 posted 2002-03-23 12:32 PM

So sad that love can turn out like that. "Love blossomed into death" is a powerful phrase, Joanna. Well said.

sky

Larry C

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since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

4 posted 2002-03-23 01:18 AM

Joanne,
"loved blossomed into death"

Whoa! That is intense. Awesome write...but good to move on too.

Everybody thinks of changing humanity and nobody thinks of changing himself. Leo Tolstoy

Skyfire

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since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

5 posted 2002-03-23 03:30 AM

All I can say is you seem to be doing just fine. Unfortunately I've been there, and I've done that. Hold onto your memories though. The time will come when you can look back on them without pain. *hugs*

Hopelessly in love

Balladeer

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since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

6 posted 2002-03-23 08:01 AM

Of course this is fantasy, Joanna, 'cause nobody would turn away from you but you did well making it sound realistic!

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

7 posted 2002-03-23 08:11 AM

Joanna,
A very intense write, enjoyed the read.

Opeth
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since 2001-12-13

Posts 1543
The Ravines

8 posted 2002-03-23 08:23 AM

I could feel this.

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

9 posted 2002-03-23 09:11 AM

Joanna this is a wonderful expression of your feelings. Love it. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Jesse Jaymz
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since 2000-01-24

Posts 708
Youngstown, ohio

10 posted 2002-03-23 01:59 PM

hunny
*hugs her tight* you have touched my heart with this one joanna. i am sitting here in tears. i have spoken these words before. almost exact when my ex wanda broke my heart and married another. great work hun. *hugs her tight*
love you lots
your little angel

Another town another hotel room
Another dream that ended way too soon
Left me lonely way before the dawn
Searching for the strength to carry on

RosePetal

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since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

11 posted 2002-03-23 02:18 PM

thanks friends

(((group hug))))

walker
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since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

12 posted 2002-03-23 09:03 PM

Is horrible that love can be so good and yet so bad

Great poem.

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

13 posted 2002-03-23 09:15 PM

Now I do understand the title better...and
it makes sense!....

Nicely done Joanna..

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

14 posted 2002-03-27 11:12 AM

Joanna, this is an intense and powerful write sweetie. Very very well done! I do hope you are okay and not feeling these things anymore. Hugs.

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

Greeneyes

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since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

15 posted 2002-03-27 03:03 PM

Joanna~

Very powerful, strong release in letting go...be well...HUGSSSSS to you....

Lauren~

Greeneyes~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

16 posted 2002-03-27 04:49 PM

enjoyed the read

rascalx
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since 1999-08-25

Posts 590
Florence, SC, USA

17 posted 2002-03-28 12:24 PM

Joanna,
I love the title; it gives the poem a powerful ending and visual! And you're right, you and I have shared the same painful sentiments in a very similar fashion. If you are feeling the same confusion and hurt over the loss of your relationship as I am, then I wish I could give you a big hug because I know it's
eating you up inside.
Well done! And thanks for inviting me to read your work; I'll be looking for more.

- Jeff

GhostWriter_6
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since 2001-09-03

Posts 237
??Amityville??

18 posted 2002-03-28 12:52 PM

Rose... i have watched you progress with your writing for many of months..and i am impressed by this poem.. true emotions were put into this piece.. and i want you to knwo that this poem is a great read..

1 Love,
GhostWriter_6

rosepetals25

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since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

19 posted 2002-03-28 01:14 AM

Joanna,

This has to be one of my favorites from you. I have found myself in this spot to in the past.

Wonderful write, I'm keeping this one.

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
- Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

Tracey
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since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

20 posted 2002-03-28 07:17 AM

Good write Joanna. I think everyone has experienced this at one time or another. Sometimes we have to reflect on the past in order to move on don’t we?

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

[This message has been edited by Tracey (03-28-2002 07:19 AM).]

Charisma

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since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

21 posted 2002-03-28 10:04 AM

heart wrenched penned. sad but really beautiful penned.

((hugs))
Charisma

[This message has been edited by Charisma (03-28-2002 10:05 AM).]

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