Open Poetry #19 |
Today I gave u my heart... |
TriXter Member
since 2002-03-20
Posts 112The One |
Today i did what i thought i couldnot I Would slip u my poem at break afterrnoon, or so i thought. But somone ruined my plan, somone stayed behind, so four hours i thought of ways,so my poem, you would find. I decided to follow, but not be a stalker, and slip the note afterschool, up into youre locker. I did just that, but thought i got the wrong locker too. but i knew it was youres, and I dont know what you'll do. Will u find out That it is I who sent the letter, If you do, and you smile, my heart will feel better. For now my heart is beating 50 beats a second. When u find it tommorrow, will she sit there and think, Or are my words not strong enough, Do they just go down the sink. I sent you "star gazer" whitch was stright from my soul, Explaning how youre touch,youre smile, You...make me whole. I think im in love, But i do not know how, Will i know how she feels? I want to know now. But I must wait, at least until tommorrow, If you do not feel the same, I will only feel sorrow. Will you be mine? Will you be with me? Tommorrow,Tommorrow, this we will see. [This message has been edited by TriXter (03-27-2002 06:58 PM).] |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
I decided to follow, but not be a stalker, and slip the note afterschool, up into youre locker. I did just that, but thought i got the wrong locker too. but i knew it was youres, and I dont know what you'll do. It just get's ya all churned up. I really liked your poem. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
welcome to passions enjoyed |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) I hope she answers your hearts yearning with loves true declaration, sweet friend, this is a powerful poem and I wish you and her the greatest happiness together! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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