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Soleil Noir
Senior Member

since 2001-12-19

Posts 688
USA

0 posted 2002-03-25 04:21 PM

Upon your Return

having had you ease
in as if you had
always belonged inside,
such as a breath
of air to pump lifeless
lungs

then easing out again,
having been that
master pieced seduction of
edification,
clarified

you had left your
touch,
well done,

thensilenceheldtight

you are only just
now back to
lift up these,
mine words
again

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2002-03-25 05:06 PM

Love this poem and the feel of it...
somewhat mysterious and softly passionate.

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

2 posted 2002-03-25 05:10 PM

Soleil

Sometimes a thought, a muse like air, will thus creep in and out of me, as you have written. Is it yours or mine?

Loved this! Thank you for letting me ramble a bit.

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

3 posted 2002-03-25 10:16 PM

allow me to loft these beautiful words.....BUMP!

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

4 posted 2002-03-26 07:09 AM

Soleil - you have a gift.

You are an excellent freeverse writer, and this poem breathes life...

glad I caught it.

K

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

5 posted 2002-03-26 07:15 AM

A beautifully descriptive piece Soleil Noir ... lovely phrasing and imagery, very much enjoyed.

Best wishes,
/Kit

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

6 posted 2002-03-26 09:55 PM

very beautiful......

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

7 posted 2002-03-27 05:27 PM

'tis not just your words
I hold up for all to see
it is you my dear

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

8 posted 2002-03-27 05:48 PM

like this...nice images, tightly woven, and still..the hint of more.

guess I am going to have to catch up on my reading of you....

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

9 posted 2002-03-27 08:35 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, such love and sensitivity shiens in your words, this is wonderful! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, I LOVE IT!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Soleil, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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