Open Poetry #19 |
I'll Meet You Where We Planned |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Just inside heaven's gate Is where you said you'd be I'd know exactly where to find you Beneath the beautiful birch tree Together we made this arrangement Just before you passed away My life hasn't been the same Since the events of that dreadful day I am unable to foresee On which day I'll join you there But I'm needed here right now For my love I need to share The past three years have been difficult But still my life has moved along I've tried so hard to be happy For you I've tried to be strong Not a single day goes past When I don't stop and think of you And in the early hours of slumber Your image often comes into view So please save me a place For I will meet you there one day And until we are together Inside my heart is where you'll stay Suetang |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sue, your father is undoubtably very very proud of you, even now... For you have written and shown nothing but the greatest love for him...Any man would be honored to have a young woman as you to be their daughter, and earn the respect and love you have shown to your own... |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Barry Your words always mean so much to me for I feel them inside my heart, thank you so much. Take care.....Sue Suetang |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) I agree with Magnus with all my heart, you are very special to him and always will be and he is so proud and lucky to have such a loving daughter like you just as I know he is delighted that he has passed on the gift of poetry to you and he will always be so proud of what you write from your golden heart! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, I know when the time is right you will reunite with him and be with him forever! We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is precious! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This really touched me deeply, Sue... My first husband died of cancer, almost 3 years ago...and your poem actually could have been me...talking to him. I think I have said those words or similar ones to him many times... Now I am once again in love and re-married, but not a single day goes by when I don't think about him....he was my very first love and the father of my children. Fortunately, I have a wonderful new husband who completely understands this. Thanks for sharing this beautiful and heartfelt poem with us. ~hugs~ copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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