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Open Poetry #19

War and Peace

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

0 posted 2002-03-27 07:21 AM

I lay my soul upon your heart ...

     Please listen to life's timeless thought
     as tides crash from a distant shore
     echoing battles of lives fought
     endless quarrels, the hate of war

I lay my soul upon your heart ...

     In desperation, I so plead
     let the spirits of war and peace
     intertwine and their colours bleed
     joined together in life's release

I lay my soul upon your heart ...

     Searching for better tomorrows
     never pass the power of light
     to escape such dark filled sorrows
     create a new day from each night

I lay my soul upon your heart ...
     ... for each life taken, one must start

create an addiction .... share a smile!!

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

1 posted 2002-03-27 09:28 AM

Nicely done otowen..lovely thoughts

~Victoria

"If music be the food of love, play on." (William Shakespeare)

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

2 posted 2002-03-27 09:33 AM

I lay my soul upon your heart ...

     Searching for better tomorrows
     never pass the power of light
     to escape such dark filled sorrows
     create a new day from each night"

You have a brilliant way of saying words that reach the heart....very touching Craig...

Lauren~

Greeneyes~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (03-27-2002 09:33 AM).]

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-03-27 11:11 PM

(smiles) BRAVO!!! Ooohhhhh...this is wonderful, sweet friend, this is a fabulous between-the-lines poem from your golden heart! (big hugggssssss) May you find all your heart desires and find the inner-peace you deserve, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Craig, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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