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Island Cruise...Between the Lines
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Island Cruise...Between the Lines |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States 
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Island Cruise…Between the Lines By Larry Chadwick I got your postcard in the mail, I miss you It seems you’re having lots of fun. I miss you I liked that picture on the card, I miss you I’ll be you’re getting a lot of sun. I’m really glad you took this trip, I miss you It’s good that one of us could get away. I miss you Tell everyone that I said hi, I miss you I sure wish this rain would not stay. I’m not a letter writer you can tell, I miss you But the kids are really doing fine. I miss you Plants are watered and the dog is fed, I miss you And the place is clean most of the time. Hope you get this note before you leave, I miss you And so you’ll know everything is okay. I miss you I’ll save my vacation time another year, I miss you Maybe we can do this together some day. March 25, 2002 [This message has been edited by Larry C (03-26-2002 01:58 AM).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Larry, I'm really enjoying reading between the lines.  And I'm happy to say, I didn't miss you today.  Howz that for being a twisted sister? |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Kacy, You never even thought of me...I'll bet.  But I must say come midnight...I think of you!  |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Larry...I love these "between the lines" poems of yours... They say so much that the lines themselves fail to convey... great idea...  ~hugs~copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Larry, these 'between the lines' poems are so darned great! I am loving them! More please? Hugs. ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Lyra, I guess I stumbled on to some fun. Thanks. Nancy Lee, Oh cool. 'Cause I'm really having fun with them. Thanks. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautifully heartfelt, sweet friend, I know she misses you so much too and may you come home to her soon and love her always! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is gorgeous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Larry, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
What a neat poetic form this is Larry. Way cool!! If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Neat poem...James |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Larry~ A vacation, yeahhhhh thats what I need....LOL a long one....woohooo...  Lauren~ Greeneyes~ |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Noah, Actually this was a real event (minus the kids at home lol) and the feelings are real as well. Thanks.Tracey, Thanks...I'm probably wearing it out. But it is fun. JM, Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. Lauren, I got a wooohooo! Way cool. Hope I get mine this year. Everybody thinks of changing humanity and nobody thinks of changing himself. Leo Tolstoy |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Come to FLORIDA for vacation! The beaches are nice! Love your poem. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Larry This was filled with love and longing. I could almost hear your heart pining. You write so very well. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Nice write,Larry Sandra |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Joanna, I get a vacation! Whoa! Thanks. Sue, Thank you so very much. Sandra, Thank you for reading. I have probably worn out the between the lines but...oh well. |
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