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the whispering wind
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the whispering wind |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298
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she one upped soft spoken and whispered her wishes to the wind she never waited for the silent echoes, she knew they would not be coming but the wind took them and oh how it whistled, oh how it moaned she stopped and marveled pleased she whispered again the wind tickled and giggled her giddy she shut her eyes against the dust she shut her eyes and just listened the wind murmured her every whisper, until the day she didn’t |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Now this.... is poetry... a pleasure to read, and re-read... each time enjoying the flow and image..drawing from the ideas a bit more perhaps than even you knew you put in there... Bravo! |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
Well, Cpat took my words and gave them to you...good of him to do so... Brava! |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
thank you.....what a compliment...and from you,it means even more.......was considering putting down my pen, and then yesterday up pops this one.....sigh....guess I am stuck with being a writer  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JellyBeans~ 'the wind tickled and giggled her giddy' Something here just bears keeping ... I really like this~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
You bet your sweet bippy you're stuck writing... cause I'll steal that talented pen of yours if you ever dare lay it down for long. *G* Just try me! LOL I don't know if there's anything I can add to my earlier pontificating. *G* But I can say that I enjoyed another read... this is one I'll enjoy reading many times. *S* Well done, WRITER! *S* |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
lol@steal your pen, you'd have to come here to do it...so I might just try you thank you lady |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) This is soooooo powerfully bittersweet, sweet friend, my heart goes out to the lost dreams in this poem but I pray that soon the winds will whisper back and deliver all that her heart desires! (sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed the read |
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