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Krissy
Senior Member

since 2002-02-22

Posts 556
kent England

0 posted 2002-03-26 11:05 AM

I Sigh

Sigh of eyes caress
Brush softly gently in me
Touch the heart of me

Krissy

And while thy willing soul transpiers
at every pore with instant fires
Andrew Marvell 1621-1678

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

1 posted 2002-03-26 11:06 AM

sweet sis/niece,

this is such beautiful writing!
has such a tender soft flow about it
and made me smile. thank you for posting
such a lovely gem!

take care. love you.
amy

"you can't stop
the rain
from pouring down
can't stop the
world from turning 'round
can't stop me from
loving you
no matter
what you do"

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

2 posted 2002-03-26 11:19 AM

This is so pretty and dreamy!

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

3 posted 2002-03-26 11:56 AM

This is so pretty.

Nan

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2002-03-26 12:22 PM

Krissy~

In softest blinking
Lash of eye in mascara
Flitting fluttered flirt~

*HUGS*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2002-03-26 12:32 PM

Krissy,
Good on enjoyed the read.

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

6 posted 2002-03-26 12:35 PM

soft senyru...specific to the count

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2002-03-26 10:16 PM

(smiles) You are sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always shine with love and beauty! (kiss on cheek) May love forever sing to your heart, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Krissy, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

8 posted 2002-03-26 11:04 PM

Look at this!! From a complete non-poet to a senyru creator in no time flat! Impressive!!!!

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

9 posted 2002-03-27 05:00 AM

Krissy,
look at this my little poet all grown up. *Sob*
Kethp

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

10 posted 2002-03-27 09:56 AM

Answer one question ~
what don't you do very well?
I am listening

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

11 posted 2002-03-27 03:51 PM

*SIGH*

Lovely senryu my friend

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

12 posted 2002-03-27 05:03 PM

touch the heart of me
your sighs echo in my heart
my sighs fill your ear

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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