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Soleil Noir
Senior Member

since 2001-12-19

Posts 688
USA

0 posted 2002-03-26 02:20 PM

Teach

Time and tide took her whim
casting thoughts on out to him
he in turn stood still, and stern
He requested her: look, and learn!

She held her hands for him to see
wear and tear of monotony
and filled with tears her eyes then did
for her heart would do his bid

And took the hour by its toll
from her dreams the time she stole
and opened heart to bring withal
that which would carry beyond the pall

Teach me! is all she asked
and he, burdened with his own task
left behind a trail of crumbs
and yet, she would not succumb

Teach me! her heart would plead
for so deep this very need
and bound was she to honor Words
her blood was piqued for she would stir

a rhythm to rhyme or let it flow
if nothing more, nothing more than show
tribute! Praise! Give Accolades!
Before her very light would fade…

Time and tide took her whim…
She held her hands for him to see…

Ink stains beheld but one word,
Glory.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

1 posted 2002-03-26 02:45 PM

learn. . .

well done my friend. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

2 posted 2002-03-26 02:49 PM

1derful!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

3 posted 2002-03-26 02:55 PM

And you certainly have learned...

Love the flow of this poem...good cadence.
Very good message...

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-03-26 08:14 PM

(smiles) And such wonderful learning can always be achieved through thinking for ourselves and to all other measures, sweet freidn, this is wonderful! Your words always have us thinking so deeply, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Soleil, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

5 posted 2002-03-26 10:00 PM

Once again.... beautiful...
Kinda how I feel right now... teach me LOL more ... more...Time would help

Connie

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