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I Have Loved You
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I Have Loved You |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia 
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I Have Loved You I know now these words will never let you truly go on But, it's my effort to show you where we've been all along And, so we lie apart with your mind and it's wonder of how I feel In your carrying of anger instead of searching what was really real... All of my life it was you that I carried here in my heart How often I wondered what you were like when years kept us apart But, I have loved you even before I ever saw your face Just finally our presence together was when I found my place... Don't ever believe my heart was never on your side For I walked many miles in life holding you inside We had the seasons for proof that we shared a common ground And, how the earth was a part of the love we found... Oh, I sure have loved you on a warm summers night With just the stars overhead and their peaceful light And, how I loved you when in the air was a hint of dawn Cause, I loved you there the whole night long... We have loved when you wanted to love and we shared that space We loved while fall winds moved the leaves that fell with grace Just a chill of the winds we sure kept one another warm And, still loved as God gave us the harsh winter storms... Oh, I have loved you while white filled the fields of brown And, I loved you as each tiny flake fell down For the snow was just another season we went through Oh, how beautiful white sure looked on you... So, we may lie apart now but it can never be taken back And, these memories will remain as long as the seasons last Just never doubt that I just did the best I could in life May your heart show you someday I only did what was right... Sauni @~~~>~~ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"Oh, I have loved you while white filled the fields of brown And, I loved you as each tiny flake fell down For the snow was just another season we went through Oh, how beautiful white sure looked on you..." WOW! That is pure poetry. Absolutely fantastic, Sauni. Wish I had written that.  You never cease to amaze me, sweet friend. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) This is soooooooo beautifully bittersweet, sweet friend, it was a little sad to feel the memories of love passed now but may they always shine in your heart and fill you with true happiness! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Saunni, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hi, I got lots from this..mostly personal feelings bubbling up. You surely expressed these feelings in a beautiful and effectve way. Sandra |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
you have found what's in your heart lately my friend. . . and have put here in words from there. . . wonderfully done. . .  ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
We had the seasons for proof that we shared a common ground And, how the earth was a part of the love we found... Beautiful, meaningful words, Saunni... Romantic yet real!  ~hugs~copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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