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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2002-03-26 01:32 PM



...Whatever for,
I say to myself,
do I like what I see
when I reach into the depths of you.
I measure each word so carefully;
the complexity of you
sometimes not within my
intellectual competence.
But I hold in reserve,
the strength needed
to untangle my confusions of you,
for Whatever...
M
*w...did I meet that challenge?

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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Deep in the heart
1 posted 2002-03-26 02:02 PM


I don't know what the challenge was, or who made it, but I love this piece!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2002-03-26 02:07 PM


Don't you remember this one..I don't know if you did one or not..but said you were going to *s

and since I am still home ill...I am searching for something to keep my mind working *s
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3 posted 2002-03-26 07:54 PM




WOW!!! Ooohhhhhhhh...I love it, sweet friend, I love how your words are reflexive and are just like staring at yourself through a medicine cabinet mirror, with your thoughts coming back together! (kiss on cheek) I love it, sweet friedn, this is an excellent challenge reply, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Larry C
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4 posted 2002-03-26 09:09 PM


M,
Very well done!

Madame Chipmunk
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5 posted 2002-03-26 09:17 PM


I liked it very much, Maureen....and I hope that you feel better soon.
Tomorrow night it will be Passover...maybe some Matzohball soup will make that cough go away.
I will be having chemotherapy for Passover, tomorrow....I hope thats kosher!

  ~hugggssss~
Happy Passover!

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
6 posted 2002-03-27 12:19 PM


Thank you  Noah..and Larry  *s

and you Lyra, take that chemo and pretend it is...and use that strength you have to be back here telling us it didn't "taste" so bad after all...

You do bring me to a  ~smiling~ place. *s

hugsss
M

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