Open Poetry #19 |
Whatever for/for Whatever |
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
...Whatever for, I say to myself, do I like what I see when I reach into the depths of you. I measure each word so carefully; the complexity of you sometimes not within my intellectual competence. But I hold in reserve, the strength needed to untangle my confusions of you, for Whatever... M *w...did I meet that challenge? "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I don't know what the challenge was, or who made it, but I love this piece! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Don't you remember this one..I don't know if you did one or not..but said you were going to *s and since I am still home ill...I am searching for something to keep my mind working *s /pip/Forum7/HTML/000431.html |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
WOW!!! Ooohhhhhhhh...I love it, sweet friend, I love how your words are reflexive and are just like staring at yourself through a medicine cabinet mirror, with your thoughts coming back together! (kiss on cheek) I love it, sweet friedn, this is an excellent challenge reply, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
M, Very well done! |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I liked it very much, Maureen....and I hope that you feel better soon. Tomorrow night it will be Passover...maybe some Matzohball soup will make that cough go away. I will be having chemotherapy for Passover, tomorrow....I hope thats kosher! ~hugggssss~ Happy Passover! copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you Noah..and Larry *s and you Lyra, take that chemo and pretend it is...and use that strength you have to be back here telling us it didn't "taste" so bad after all... You do bring me to a ~smiling~ place. *s hugsss M |
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