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ShadowRider
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since 2001-07-14

Posts 1038
USA

0 posted 2002-03-25 11:39 PM

                 Lessons of Verticality

      upper        loyalty        a        undefended
     mobility         is          broad        taunts
      perks      measured    smile         are
        for            by            is           the
      those         the        Viagra         best
       with        amount        for          ways
      wings          of             a             to
    feathers        tail          happy      reflect
      buy            wags     receptive     real
    freedom       given         soul        truth

skyshine

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since 2002-02-07

Posts 3058
Beneath the northern stars

1 posted 2002-03-25 11:43 PM

Very interesting read!

sky

I'm in charge, and I say question authority!

Madame Chipmunk
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since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

2 posted 2002-03-26 12:11 PM

These are great, Jeff...
really the truth!

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2002-03-26 12:34 PM

Cool write, Jeff. I want some very powerful feathers. Send them via carrier pigeon. No, please make that carrier eagle.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

4 posted 2002-03-26 03:25 AM

wow, just amazing!

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

5 posted 2002-03-26 10:50 AM

love the last one especially Jeff..very creative indeed..hugss

~Victoria

"If music be the food of love, play on." (William Shakespeare)

Dulcinea
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since 2001-07-22

Posts 774
IN

6 posted 2002-03-26 11:11 AM

Love these upright lessons of life...Viagra smile?? *LOL* Oh..you are too much!

Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

7 posted 2002-03-26 12:04 PM

These are neat.

Nan

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

8 posted 2002-03-26 12:21 PM

ShadowRider,
You could have stood then on a ground poem. Enjoyed

Marsha

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since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

9 posted 2002-03-26 01:29 PM

Jeff darling boy this is utterly utterly brilliant. I really do love this delightful and picturesque poem, it really painted the picture, and something you excel at doing. Absolutely excellent writing. Very very creative and excellent language use. Well written darling boy.

Absolutely fabulous writing

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

10 posted 2002-03-26 01:36 PM

very nicely done, Jeff..I enjoyed them *s

M

ShadowRider
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since 2001-07-14

Posts 1038
USA

11 posted 2002-03-27 12:18 PM

skyshine
Lyra
Midnitesun
passing shadows
Victoria
Dulcinea
Pilgrimage
Seymour
Marsha
nakdthoughts

My puter bit the dust yesterday, so I must do a group hug here! hehee..and a huge BIG thank you to you all. Sorry about not being able to reply individually, and I will be back soon! Got my techie working on the problem now!

Jeff

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