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The Sun |
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Lance McLove New Member
since 2001-07-17
Posts 8 |
The Sun It is a beautiful day And it seems like the sun is calling out my name: "Lance! Lance!" "Yes!" I reply. "No," the Sun says, "Not you." "Oh . . . Well, you did say Lance, right?" "No, I'm sorry. Excuse me. I said Chance." "Oh ok. It sounded like Lance when you called from far away." "Yeah, I guess it could have." "Yeah." "Yeah. Great, Well I gotta go." The sun disappears behind a cloud and I am left alone. "Ok." Well, it's still a beautiful day, even if the sun is calling someone else. Though . . . it was a little awkward. |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Lance Hi there, this is excellent writing, I really do like the conversational quality to this. Well done very well written   Love and warm stuff As always Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
 I love it! Awkward indeed, but it was still a beautiful day, so that's all right. Nan |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Interesting style!!!! I liked it very much...this conversation with the Sun. ***Ivy Rose |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always bring sunshine to all our hearts! (sigh) This is a wonderful delightful conversation on a beautiful sun-shining day, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lance, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Interesting...James |
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