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Open Poetry #19

How I live

DonFurr
Member

since 2001-01-01

Posts 172
Monticello IN

0 posted 2002-03-25 02:28 AM

Walking as a gentleman walks
Talking as a gentleman talks
Holding honor as if it were
a friend in need of a hug

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2002-03-25 02:54 AM

very nice, indeed

Death
Member

since 2001-05-26

Posts 112
Twilight

2 posted 2002-03-25 07:46 AM

Why your last two lines are quite nice.
A sojourn from standard minimalism to
one speaking quatrain. This is most interesting.

I thank you for your insight.

"Sooner or later, Death makes a believer out of just about everyone."

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

3 posted 2002-03-25 01:52 PM

lovely poem...nice style of writing.

take care.
amy

"you can't stop
the rain
from pouring down
can't stop the
world from turning 'round
can't stop me from
loving you
no matter
what you do

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

4 posted 2002-03-25 01:54 PM

very sweet...
this is done with a certain peaceful appeal.
enjoyed.

How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so.
~Sarah MacLachlan~

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