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Rodney Belcher Member
since 2000-06-06
Posts 227Taylor, Michigan |
Suppose One day I awoke And knew that things had changed That for once I was happy Truly happy and life had more meaning The sun shone brighter The air smelled fresher The birds sang sweeter Suppose that day came After the darkest of nights When my heart felt dead And my soul was black The ray of light that started that day So bright its purity hurt my eyes What a feeling that would be To have it happen to me To cleanse this heart and soul Almost spiritual, but all in this world That day did happen In the most unlikely of times When I had given up and doubted honesty existed You came along, a ray of pure light You made me whole, made me feel again Awakening this lovers being To know what true and unconditional love is Together we find the feelings we need To make the difference in our worlds To finally live Truly live Nothing ever happens unless first a Dream - Rod [This message has been edited by Rodney Belcher (03-24-2002 11:51 AM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Rodney Belcher, A good read, I enjoyed |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Rodney these are some wonderful lines. I truly enjoyed reading this one. Lovely work. floria Floria |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Suppose there was a perfect day? Sounds like this was it. Wonderful, uplifting write Rodney. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) And I know dep down with all my heart that there will be days like this, and more than suppoosedly! (big hugggsssss) May each brand new day always offer you hope and peace, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Rodney, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Rodney darling boy Do you know how good this really is? Not just the form although that is excellent. I mean the construction the flow the internal rhythm this is utterly stunning. YOU are indeed a master of art here. The whole of this is exquisite, and do I remember this feeling, the longing to be happy Perfectly penned darling boy absolutely perfect  Love and warm stuff As always Mushy   To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Scots Gent Junior Member
since 2002-01-20
Posts 17In a Lover's Heart |
What a lass...does she have a sister? SG |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Rodney, This is so beautiful and lovely writing...isn't it amazing how one person can come into our lives and change everything for the better?! *smiles* this is wonderful to read and see my friend. take care. amy  "you can't stop |
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Rodney Belcher Member
since 2000-06-06
Posts 227Taylor, Michigan |
Thank you...yoiu are all too kind...and yes she does have a sister SG but, alas, she is married  ...again thanks for all the constructive comments...Rod |
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Rodney Belcher Member
since 2000-06-06
Posts 227Taylor, Michigan |
Ahhh...AMy what a beautiful name...same as my beloved  thanks for reminding me of her another way Aimster...Rod |
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