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TriXter
Member

since 2002-03-20

Posts 112
The One

0 posted 2002-03-24 03:47 AM

Everyday, Everynight, everything, everyone
reminds me of you.
The sun, youre smile. A rose, youre lips.
The beauty of nature, is you.

as much as it tries The habbits of man can not destroy what is there.
The coldest comment, the meanest glare,cannot drop me to the ground, when you are there.

I wake up only to be greeted with harsh realitys of life,
Wondering Should i even bother,
and u are there.
You keep me going, you keep me smileing, you make me, me.

but i cant touch you. not yet, not now, mabye not ever.
For these feelings i have must stay inside.
now,here,forever.
Why must I be like this, why cant i be strong.
because of you.
Everything about you stuns me.
youre smile,youre laugh, or the way you chew on youre pencil when youre nervous.

always when im down, when im low, whem im scared,
my thoughts of you, keep pushing my through.

because when there is no hope, no sun, no smiles.
even at the end of the line, there is you.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2002-03-24 05:45 AM

everything is a lot...I wish you peace

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-03-24 12:54 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, and may that special person forever ease your mind of troubles and fill you with joy and hope, sweet friend, this is a wonderfully delightful poem of friendship's gift! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is gorgeous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

amusemi
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1262
A State of Disarray

3 posted 2002-03-24 01:22 PM

This reminds me of the power and beauty loving a person can have in our lives...

I enjoyed this very much!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2002-03-24 07:52 PM

Yes when we love someone it seems like they are everything...James

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

5 posted 2002-03-24 10:35 PM

Welcome to Passions, Trix...
I enjoyed your poem

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

6 posted 2002-03-25 12:14 PM

I like this very much....and can relate

Welcome

Death
Member

since 2001-05-26

Posts 112
Twilight

7 posted 2002-03-25 02:25 AM

To have such to hold must be an amazing experience.
You have stated it well.

My thanks for your insights.

"Sooner or later, Death makes a believer out of just about everyone."

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

8 posted 2002-03-25 01:21 PM

trixter,

this is a beautiful love poem! the
beauty comes shinging through the
page...just wonderfully expressed!!
take care.
amy

"you can't stop
the rain
from pouring down
can't stop the
world from turning 'round
can't stop me from
loving you
no matter
what you do

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