Open Poetry #19 |
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DonFurr Member
since 2001-01-01
Posts 172Monticello IN |
She is the fire to my water and creates a new song This lake was iced over for far far too long |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may your love forever fill your heart with rapture and melt the ice from the lake of your heart and warm it with joy! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Don, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Simple and dynamic. I really liked the fire on water... I liked it all! ThisDiamond |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Don, very nice write indeed...beautiful poem! take care. amy "you can't stop |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
hi I was captivated from the first line! I want to see MORE from you! |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I love the imagery in this little gem, Don. Please post more poems. copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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