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DonFurr
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0 posted 2002-03-23 11:18 PM



She is the fire to my water
and creates a new song
This lake was iced over
for far far too long

© Copyright 2002 Don Furr - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-03-23 11:25 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may your love forever fill your heart with rapture and melt the ice from the lake of your heart and warm it with joy! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Don, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

ThisDiamond
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2 posted 2002-03-23 11:30 PM


Simple and dynamic. I really liked the fire on water... I liked it all! ThisDiamond
Aimster
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3 posted 2002-03-24 10:09 PM


Don,

very nice write indeed...beautiful
poem!

take care.
amy

"you can't stop
the rain
from pouring down
can't stop the
world from turning 'round
can't stop me from
loving you
no matter
what you do

RosePetal
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4 posted 2002-03-24 10:12 PM


hi I was captivated from the first line! I want to see MORE from you!
Madame Chipmunk
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5 posted 2002-03-24 10:21 PM


I love the imagery in this little gem, Don.
Please post more poems.

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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