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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2002-03-24 04:14 AM


You Shall Be Mine

Shall we spend some
magic moments together?
I have plenty of time
to admire you to adore you
as we partake of loves vine.

Shall we spend some
magic moments together?
I have plenty of time
to touch you to kiss you
to share some Merlot wine.

Shall we spend some
magic moments together?
I have plenty of time
to fall in love with you
to be yours and in time
you shall be mine.

JamesLee
March23
2002


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passing shadows
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1 posted 2002-03-24 05:42 AM


time...what a luxury these days! nice one James
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2 posted 2002-03-24 08:59 AM


Excellent JM...love the way you wrote this
and surely she knows...

Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2002-03-24 09:14 AM


James,
Good enjoyed the read.

Victoria
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4 posted 2002-03-24 09:36 AM


I love this one James..my favorite..

               ~Victoria


"If music be the food of love, play on."  (William Shakespeare)



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5 posted 2002-03-24 10:24 AM


enjoyed
strbbux
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6 posted 2002-03-24 11:29 AM


James. I hope she said yes, this was beautiful. You couldn't have said it better. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Dulcinea
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7 posted 2002-03-24 11:42 AM


Ahhhhhh...reading you James, is like spending an hour in a Hallmark store...always uplifting!
Silver Streak
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8 posted 2002-03-24 11:48 AM


Beautifully penned, James.

((James))
-newell

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

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9 posted 2002-03-24 11:52 AM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, I sure hope she said yes, your words are always so magical to us all and I know that she will fall in love with you all over again every time you speak them to her! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is breathtaking! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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10 posted 2002-03-24 03:31 PM


James darling boy now this is one of your utter utter best, I love it. YOU have such a fabulous talent and in this you portray it to pure perfection.
Outstanding writing as always you show how well you can write  


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


Madame Chipmunk
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11 posted 2002-03-24 10:25 PM


Very romantic, James

Shall we spend some
magic moments together?
I have plenty of time
to touch you to kiss you
to share some Merlot wine.

much enjoyed...

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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