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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2002-03-23 10:09 PM

One voice in resonance breathes life into my heart
Measurements in sequins and of laughter mingling smart
Roses bloom to open of their petals to his touch
One voice in resonance has filled my soul this much

Once found an unexpected miracle as never known before
Metered out in shy shared admiration, that flowered so much more
In his absence to be here and welcomed from the tips to toes
Once found this Knight a Prince, the likeness of as no one knows

One voice distracts my inclination to keep far away
Measurements in beats, subtracting miles between each day
In him I see extended all the beauty that was given us
One voice my ear to hear, my heart to flow so amorous

Copyright Kkh 3/23/02

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2002-03-23 10:18 PM

ThisDiamond,
A beautiful write and I enjoyed the read.

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2002-03-23 10:18 PM

Kathleen, this is beautiful. And a Keeper!

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

3 posted 2002-03-23 10:29 PM

Kathleen,  yep...I got it now...the name...

One voice that falls upon the ears
bringing happiness and smiling tears.
One voice,  sharing all is to be
This voice,  from him,  ever happily!

Obviously,  your words shout what you hear.
Nicely done..

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

4 posted 2002-03-23 10:46 PM

This is lovely!!! I really enjoyed it.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-03-23 10:59 PM

(smiles) This is a gorgeous echo of loves declaration, sweet friend, I LOVE IT!!! (kiss on cheek) May the beauty of true love forever reverberate in your heart, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

6 posted 2002-03-23 11:20 PM

ThisDiamond....EXCELLENT POEM!!! Gorgeous images strewn throughout the verses of this poem. Plus beautiful, poetic language.

***Ivy Rose

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

7 posted 2002-03-23 11:20 PM

Hey, thanks you guys!
There has been some wonderful work on the blue pages this week. I really enjoyed it, and all of you. ThisDiamond

Balladeer

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since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

8 posted 2002-03-23 11:28 PM

Much of that wonderful work has been yours, diamond one...you are a pleaure to read

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

9 posted 2002-03-24 03:22 AM

awesome, and do I know what you feel! well, once I knew anyhow.

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

10 posted 2002-03-24 12:06 PM

Daimond I do like your style. great poem beautiful lines. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

11 posted 2002-03-27 01:57 AM

I liked the way this poem was presented it flowed so beautifully, and of course the content was simply wonderful. Thank you for sharing this lovely piece.

~* Reality is an illusion ~ albeit a persistant one *~
Albert Einstein

Verve
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since 1999-06-23

Posts 348
Singapore

12 posted 2002-03-27 05:55 AM

Simply a delight ...
The words are still reasonating in my head ... ...

Nice work.

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