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Hallucination Member
since 2001-03-18
Posts 419 |
Lonely, Empty. © 2002 Brian Eggertsen, All Rights Reserved V1: I think it will be for the best If she just clear her stuff and leave, Because right now I'd like to Stand alone on this mountain peek. Where she left me, lonely, empty... V2: Now I'm just a shadow of who She really wanted me to be, Guess I didn't meet her standards 'Cause now I'm drowning in the sea. Where she left me, lonely, empty... C: I'm gonna miss her, but us torn, Is prob'ly best in the long run. No more crying, no more heartaches, No more trying, to ease the pain. And this time I know it's for sure, 'Cause her shib's leaving the harbor. Where she left me, lonely, empty. V3: Finally all her things are gone Not a piece of her left in me, I'm ready to begin my life So I'm burning the memories. Where she left me, lonely, empty... Re-C. B: There's monday night football With the guys at the bar, I can get caught stealing From the old cookie jare. And nobody will care, 'Cause I'm the only one there. Where she left me, lonely, empty Re-C. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Hallucination, I enjoyed the repetition and the theme of this but it could be improved if you spellcheck  Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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