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The thin string of life that bears the soul
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The thin string of life that bears the soul |
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EroseGrover Junior Member
since 2000-07-09
Posts 44SD,CA 92126 |
life is held but in a thin string which to the eye is nothing to behold unless you look, for it shurly bears the soul. the soul of each and everyman all the feelings from inside, on this string do they reside. thinner and thinner the string is spun. so thin you can see it only when the golden sun beem across its many fibers. this string which many do not see becomes an unknown mystery. it seems the mind and dances through the heart the thin string of life that bears the soul. in whispers along each finger creeping across each toe. This thin string that only can be seen with the light of love shinning threw the lookers eyes. For what they see to their suprise will be the bearers soul. [This message has been edited by EroseGrover (03-22-2002 11:52 PM).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"This thin string that only can be seen with the light of love shining threw (through) the lookers eyes. For what they see to there (their) suprise will be the bearers soul" While the typos and grammar/spelling errors are annoying, they do not stop me from understanding and enjoying this. (Or maybe you did mean threw, past tense of throw?? That would give the meaning of that line an entirely different twist.) |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may all your dreams and joys be attached together forever like pearls on a necklace and braid your heart with loves rapture! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Little_White_Flowers Junior Member
since 2002-01-27
Posts 23 |
Very nice. keep up the good work dear |
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