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SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown

0 posted 2002-03-21 10:26 PM


My heart is filled with many tears
Knowing that you and I have to part
My love for you, I still hold inside
Where it has been right from the start

I will just have to take it with me
With memories of the love shared
Of all the warm embraces given
As we showed how much we cared

You will never know how much it hurt
When I had to give up and say goodbye
Knowing that you didn't care enough
I often wonder if everything was a ly

My love for you is there to stay
And, I will think of you everyday
© By Sue 3-21-02


© Copyright 2002 Sue Graves - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-03-21 10:33 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Sue, this is so very sad but also filled with so much love, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and it saddens me to feel goodbye from your heart but I hope now true love has welcomed you into his heart and now you always share true loves laughter everyday! (kiss on cheek) This is sooooooo beautifully sensitive, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2002-03-21 10:40 PM


always hard to say good bye to the ones we care about..nicely written...
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3 posted 2002-03-22 08:57 AM


Smartchick this is so nice, I cant imagine it being on the second page, "bump" floria

Floria

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But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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4 posted 2002-03-22 09:12 AM


SmartChick,
A bittersweet write, enjoyed.

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5 posted 2002-03-22 09:11 PM


SmartChick~
Beautiful flow to your phrasing in this piece~
Poignantly touching~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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6 posted 2002-03-22 10:08 PM


aww don't worry smart chick, soon you will have the utmost happiness that u deserve
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7 posted 2002-03-23 12:03 PM


Sue, you already know that saying goodbye always hurts. But sometimes, goodbye is the only word that is left between two people who are heading down different paths. May your new solo path be smooth. Hugs, and warm thoughts for a new adventure.  
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